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February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(nosebleed) I loved it! I never liked Gohan as seme until your stories lol! Great job!
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, this story was definitely well written and the characters were well developed. My only issue stemmed from Goku being uke to Gohan... Just doesn't seem right to me. But anyway, thanks for the story and I have enjoyed many of your other fics as well. :)
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I liked it.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing and im soo glad you write about them but i wanna know if you will ever write one where they just love each other and have hot steamy sex i love your out looks on all your story some times there really sad though lol thanks a bucnches no flames here!!!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
actually i dont really care, if incest or not. not after reading the first lines of your story. ^3^
by the way, i ´ve not only read this ff of yours, but the other ones either. and i still am reading. ^-^
and they´re sooo hot and passionful and funny and..!!! god, i died, as goten did, and i started to hate goku for being so ...i don´t know! i LOVE goku! i did since the first episode! but you make me hate him for letting goten move and live alone to become a dead man.
...but that´s another story, isn´t it?! yes, i think so. ^^ this ff here was as hot and special as your other ones are. i cant say much more, but that your writing style is just great. and i like that you always write in the "i" pov. it makes every little thought of the character become more true and even deeper. so that i am almost forced to feel what the character is feeling ( that sounds weird and not like a compliment, but believe me, it is a compliment! d=^^=b ) well, what´s more? oh ya! ^_____^ your timimg and the way you put the humor in, is very charming and very funny! in this ff of yours for example, i laughed myself to death, as gohan snapped at goku, when his father tried to stop him. :D "no!what do you want!?" :D like dont bother me, i am busy here so shut up. :DDD it was so cute and funny. sooo, i just wanna say, i really like your fanfictions and i think noone would dare to flame you, just because it´s incest. i think if you got flames, than i am $§"%& sure, people didnt even read your stuff. or they are just jelous. flames just show you, that you´re able to write good and hot stuff, y´know? ^-^ same thing with mean comments and so on.
so please keep on writing.
i´ll keep watching further it. ^3^
baibai,
Saiyajinprincess. d^^b
by the way, i ´ve not only read this ff of yours, but the other ones either. and i still am reading. ^-^
and they´re sooo hot and passionful and funny and..!!! god, i died, as goten did, and i started to hate goku for being so ...i don´t know! i LOVE goku! i did since the first episode! but you make me hate him for letting goten move and live alone to become a dead man.
...but that´s another story, isn´t it?! yes, i think so. ^^ this ff here was as hot and special as your other ones are. i cant say much more, but that your writing style is just great. and i like that you always write in the "i" pov. it makes every little thought of the character become more true and even deeper. so that i am almost forced to feel what the character is feeling ( that sounds weird and not like a compliment, but believe me, it is a compliment! d=^^=b ) well, what´s more? oh ya! ^_____^ your timimg and the way you put the humor in, is very charming and very funny! in this ff of yours for example, i laughed myself to death, as gohan snapped at goku, when his father tried to stop him. :D "no!what do you want!?" :D like dont bother me, i am busy here so shut up. :DDD it was so cute and funny. sooo, i just wanna say, i really like your fanfictions and i think noone would dare to flame you, just because it´s incest. i think if you got flames, than i am $§"%& sure, people didnt even read your stuff. or they are just jelous. flames just show you, that you´re able to write good and hot stuff, y´know? ^-^ same thing with mean comments and so on.
so please keep on writing.
i´ll keep watching further it. ^3^
baibai,
Saiyajinprincess. d^^b
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whimper* do i even have to say it?!!
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Like....OMFG! THAT IS SO FUCKING HOT! *does the happy dance* Go girl! Go girl! Hope you do more soon!
Like....OMFG! THAT IS SO FUCKING HOT! *does the happy dance* Go girl! Go girl! Hope you do more soon!
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Wow... I'm always a little iffy about incest, but you wrote that so well ^.^. I think you kept Gohan and Goku in character pretty well; didn't make them so outragously OCC that I couldn't stand it.
I also think it was a good choice to make Goku uke ^.^. It just fits him so well and is more believable.
Well done!
I also think it was a good choice to make Goku uke ^.^. It just fits him so well and is more believable.
Well done!