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February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahah finally! Video kicked it! Lol! I loved this! Great job!
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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loves it all of it!!!!! Do you have anymore stories your writing is amazing and I loves just about every thing you write
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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha I loved it! I especially enjoyed the Pan/Videl bashing...I hate them both in GT. Goten and Gohan are so cute together! When they aren't trying to hate each other, that is.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
JUST TO STATE THE OBVIOUS GREAT JOB I LOVE YOUR STORYS!!!! and it makes no sense for someone to read all the way though it and then review saying dumb shit i mean really........ thanks for posting!!!!!! i have officaly read all your storys now lol
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. . .just wow that was a great story. who knew Goten loved Gohan that much. and i liked the ending when he killed Videl. He did it so well and it didn't even phaze him. great write.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the only question i have is did you have to make pan a slut...
couldn't she have just been a mislead child. or something.
the story was wonderful... can't wait to read more of your work.
couldn't she have just been a mislead child. or something.
the story was wonderful... can't wait to read more of your work.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!! god it was just awsome i love Soncest there just isn't enough of that around...
oh well...
STILL!!! thank you for writing this i hope you keep up with the soncest stories! =]
oh well...
STILL!!! thank you for writing this i hope you keep up with the soncest stories! =]
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i dont like the message in it ...well if i was clever enough, to get the message right,
of course ^^* to be honest i´m not sure about that. no i´m not.
it was a little bit too agresive, for my taste.
but that means nothing, because first of all it´s your story, my taste and
last but not least, i have to confess,that thrilled me so much,
that i have to read further and further. ^-^
well. errh. that could mean, that i dont even know, my own taste, right? *giggle*
i donno, but what i do know is that i like AND dont like this story.
( whatever THAT´s supposed to mean *smile* )
oh and of course i think your writing style ( in the "i" form) is really interesting,
exciting and made me enjoy reading every scentence :)
bye! ^3^
of course ^^* to be honest i´m not sure about that. no i´m not.
it was a little bit too agresive, for my taste.
but that means nothing, because first of all it´s your story, my taste and
last but not least, i have to confess,that thrilled me so much,
that i have to read further and further. ^-^
well. errh. that could mean, that i dont even know, my own taste, right? *giggle*
i donno, but what i do know is that i like AND dont like this story.
( whatever THAT´s supposed to mean *smile* )
oh and of course i think your writing style ( in the "i" form) is really interesting,
exciting and made me enjoy reading every scentence :)
bye! ^3^
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok I had a little time of it trying to guess who the people were at the start but i figured it out before you stated it. Gohan has alot of issues. I LOVE IT!!
I would definately love to see more of this
I would definately love to see more of this
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! good one! although, I'd like to see Son threesome better...conionue with good work