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for Cure for the Bitch

by DetoxAngel

person Kinoha
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, you told me not to look but curiosity killed the cat, eh? I have to say my expressions while reading this must've been something like this: 0_o, OoO, o_0, o_o... whoa...! I am not a big fan of yaoi but I have a soft spot for Soncest and I have to say your fics (read them all) are quite good. Good work! I actually enjoyed this and found the spat between Gohan and Goten quite amusing. I can just imagine Videl's expression when she comes home and finds a crater and her husband and brother-in-law screwing there. Perfect WTF? -scene.

This was one hot fic in altogether. Writing more soon? I hope so! Die hard G/CC fan with a soft spot for Soncest... now we've seen everything... haha!
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o_O Holy fuck. I hard time figure it out at first. I thought of Gohan at the begining but the secound was hard to figure out until I read further. Then I was like say "Holy Fuck" and "Oh...My....God.." as I continued to read the story. I read like 2 of this kind of pairings but it still surprised me. I'm still like in shock. But happy you killed off Videl, aka Chi Chi #2. Love the story, took me by surprise, but absoultly love it. Do more soon!
person xerosky
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Decent. Needs more character development and background to make Gohan's freak-out more convincing, but it's still a readable fic.


"I DON’T CARE WHAT YOU THINK, JUST KEEP IT TO YOURSELVES!!!"

Seriously, you need to relax. Incest isn't new or shocking in this fandom, so you can stop with all the defensive capslock and exclamation points. If you're that worried about negative reviews, just don't post on public sites.
person DetoxAngel
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Xero Sky, the fic was not meant for too much insight, although I know what you mean. I knew exactly what I was doing, and am glad you thought it was decent at the very least. About the warning. You see, there are some VERY stupid people who come to visit this site, and when they read a fic, they leave nasty reviews and stuff like that. They don't bother me, but I got kicked off of a site for this, so I wanted to be PERFECTLY CRYSTAL CLEAR! But anyway, I will always leave my loud warnings, so people will know what they are reading. Some readers on this site don't always read this and are morbidly surprised when they see it. So, maybe I'll leave out the fact that I don't want any flames and just stick to my warnings. Thanks for the review.

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