rate_review Reviews

Haha! GREAT story! Into the Goku/ChiChi pairing right now!

That was fucking awesome!! I loved it!!!!!!! Is there a next chapter?

I LIKE!!!!!!!!!!! :D

I enjoyed this lemon! Chichi gets such a bad rap in a lot of fanfics that it's a great change of pace to see her and Goku desiring one another. Goku sometimes is written as a sexually clueless idiot and it seems like a disservice because if he's been married for years to Chichi with two sons, then why wouldn't he know about sex and such! Besides, Chichi MUST be happy with him becuase she's stood by him all these years. Especially when the tutor insulted Goku back after the Namek saga and she blew up and threw the guy out. And he DID say he loved her after the Majin Buu saga was over. If that isn't love I don't know what is. Excellent job.

I love the story, Please, continue it.

This is good. I like the way you have CC portrayed! Keep it up!

Almost died there. Whew, glad I was conscious enough to make it to the review. I have to say in all honesty. As much as I bash Chichi, and write fics that include Goku fucking anyone but her, Goku and Chichi are definitely without a single doubt in the world my favorite hetero couple. For some odd reason, they are always very hot together. Chichi is a pretty bitch,(I'm not a lesbian or bisexual in any way, shape, or form) I think she deserves Goku the way you made him in this fic. Damn, the was one helluva story. Hot to the point of scorching, and it certainly made me happy! Haven't read a good het in years. I loved this fic, I'm saving it to my computer and that's that. Please feel free to write more fics like this and if you are really interested in this pairing I'm warning you not to look at my fics. Anyway, sorry for the long review, but damn, somebody had to let you know how hot the was. Geez...

Good story. All I would suggest is that if you start out with 'avoiding' descriptions of body parts, you should stick to it even if the spoken content is hardly avoiding. It started out as her flower and ended up as her cunt... just a bit of a strange change is all. Otherwise, it was entertaining to read. :)

I love it! Please update soon.

I love it! Please update soon.