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oh my... that was troublesomely hot

"To think he had to back to his room and watch the other gorgeous demi Saiyan get into his bed…Goten smirked.

Maybe, when Gohan went to sleep…"

Is there any chance of developing that thought? That's one of the kinkiest theme out there and i kinda like it. Tried my hand at it but i wasn't very satisfied with the result. Considering giving it another, though.

Anyhow, thanks and congrats for this squeaky, sweet PWP xD!

Holy cow! Another Soncest writer? I was kinda getting the feeling I was the only one. We're a rare breed, aren't we? Which is such a shame. This story was HOT. I mean HOT. I couldn't believe how well written it was. When you told me about your stories also being Soncest in a review, I immediately clicked on your user name and chose a story at random. Boy, was I glad I did. You put all three of them in there, that's major points to you!

I love how you handled the situation and Gohan being the one freaking out the most and Goten being the brave, perverted one. That was really great to read and so different! Poor Goku, getting molested in his sleep. What am I saying "poor" Goku? ^^

Once again, wonderful story! I loved it. It was humorous and sexy and well written. Great job!

oh god that story was hot, but could you please write a threesome soncest. you are the hottest writer i've ever read and that's all that really needs to be said.

THIS ROCKED HARDCORE

HOT! <3

i would LOVE a sequel to to this, maybe featuring goten making gohan come in his sleep, then gohan waking up and teaching him a lesson lol, i dunno, maybe could even include goku teaching both is sons a lesson. Anyway great story, really great writing and gets me horny every time i read it :D.

This was great.
The ones where people might get caught are the best.
I agree that it would have been funny to know what goku thought in the morning and how goten and gohan would act.
Think a sequel to this could be great, especially with that final thought of gotens.

I love you!!!

*giggle* great story! and yay! that was, what i would call a plan! xD
i really wished, i could have seen goku, the next morning. ^3^ :
well, that was a weiiiirrrrrrrd drrreeaaammmmmmmm.... *lol*
^.~ i loved it and i think, you have a good feeling to form characteres.
goten the little pervert and gohan the shy, blushing but also "cant wait to do it"- guy
*grins* oh and the end was great either! funny and really worth
to be the end of that story! ^^
i enjoy all of your stories!!! bye :D