rate_review Reviews

I do hope this story is more than a one-shot, though it does good standing alone. :P I assume it isn't because of the mention of the growing animosity Buroli has for Vegeta. ^_^ So...saying that I like where this fic is going, and look forward to more. ^_^

I take it Goku shows promise power-wise, and this is why everyone was looking at him...and Vegeta mentioned him not being third-class for long?

Oh, lovely! It's got so much potential to be more than just a one-shot, what with a scheming Paragus, a jealous Brolli and Bardock caught between Toma and the king.. *grins* yes, my imagination is going overboard. However, I'd love to see this continued!

Great story, Macha. I would like to see a sequel to this someday. ;-)

Maybe this should have a sequel? *hint,hint*

Awww! Kakarotto never heard from Vegeta again? That kinda sucks. *pouts*

Great fic though ^.^ I liked the concept of the hunt and the lottery drawing to see who would accompany the royal family. Very nice!