rate_review Reviews

Great start, the whole plotidea seems to be very intersting I must say! And you've definitely gotten better with both the grammar and the spelling, but of course I can still find some mistakes! Oh, well...The portrayal was quite good, I just wished the chapters were a bit longer though, hehe!

Please continue, cos I want to read more and find out what's going to happen? Therefore please update soon...

A little forced, but nice.