rate_review Reviews

Great story!! Standing ovation!! Bravo!

I didn't read the last chapter yet, but i have to just quickly write a review and come back later for a final. I thought that your idea was quite interesting, a bit out of it hehe but it was a fresh problem that Goku could have. Whatever problem Goku would have, he would still try to be nice to whoever was being mean or unfair to him etc, and so i thought it was really believeable that he would try to make his wife happy and not want to kill those guys who wanted to have sex with him. I found Vegeta really sweet, that he was jealous at times and caring towards Goku. This is of course my favorite DBZ paring, so i enjoy reading about these two working out their problems and what not. Great job! And good luck w/ other ideas and fanfics.

I really enjoyed your work. In fact, I love ALL of your stories and I look forward to your next story....maybe a seaqel to this one neh?!?!!?

Oh my god that was such a sweet story! I'm really glad I decided to read it even with the OC suggested. Plus, your writing is amazing and there are hardly if any grammar misakes. I believe you did a really great job on this fan fic! I'll try reading your other stories. Later.

Wow, I really enjoyed reading all of this. I don't really know what else to say, but I can tell you that this is very well written and intimate.

Amazing. God I absolutely love your fanfictions! -has spent the entire day drooling over them.- I hope you're still updating! Please please PLEASE....-whines- Especially god...one I just read -goes to comment on that one too. This story was absolutely amazing, I love the plot, something I'd have never thought of and yes NEIL BURNED!!! -snickers and grins- Fantastic ending too, so very sweet...and kinky >.> XD

Amazing. God I absolutely love your fanfictions! -has spent the entire day drooling over them.- I hope you're still updating! Please please PLEASE....-whines- Especially god...one I just read -goes to comment on that one too. This story was absolutely amazing, I love the plot, something I'd have never thought of and yes NEIL BURNED!!! -snickers and grins- Fantastic ending too, so very sweet...and kinky >.> XD

naaagh. no. it´s over. *pout*
but the happy end was so great and really worth to be a happy end! did i already mentioned that i loved happy endings? well, i do! ^-^
you´ve done a great, great job! ^^ ouuuhhh and how daaaaaamn cute the whole beach scene was! ^O^
i laughed and made some strange "awwwes - giggling- sounds" while i read that! that was just fun!
gokus behaviour, to through himself on the bed and to act like an five year old! XD. really cute and very funny! :D well, i hope you will write much more fanfictions, because i like the way you think and also your ideas. it´s like a fresh breeze to read things like you´ve written here. and i mean...man, chichi as a pimp XD still cant get over it. that was such a great idea, y´know!? yeah, and at the same time i think, that you´ve a really cute way to write, because i had have to make those "strange awwwe sounds" more than just one time *giggle* ^^ soooooooo, i can say that i´ve really enjoyed to read your story and i hope i can read more from you, soon.
baibai! d^^b

I've read this story from the ebgining and i've never been able to review and tell you how much i've enjoyed it.

I loved the concept, and it was executed brilliantly. Keep up the fantastic work.

Yay! Happy endings are so great. Especially when they include lots of lemon. Thank you so much for this wonderful story.