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YAY!!! Comments back for my reviews make me happy lol. Anyways, Vegeta threating people for Goku is cute haha. Plus, i like fire. haha, jerk deserved it, and well, we really don't want to get started on ChiChi. Her name alone gives me a headache. Anyways, another good chappie and can't wait till the next. Much Love!!!

Snuggles, K.F.F.

I've read the complete fic @ gotyaoi. However, some fics are just so good that you can read them again and again, but they don't get old. I believe that your story is one of those. Sorry that I don't review as much as I should. I tend to be naughty like that, finishing one fic and moving on to the next to see if its just as good. Kami, I'm such a fiend! Please, oh please, forgiiivvvve mmmmeeeeeee!?!? Pwease update SOON!

yay new chappies hehe, i like this story. i hope they get together soon! so angsty ahhh anywho, update soon please!

snuggles, K.F.F.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...continue...now...please...anything!!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?

Snuggles, K.F.F.

This is an absolutely GREAT story. I’m glad that you’re posting again your stories, I’ve read them long time ago and, though I barely read about this fandom anymore, (just some fics of very, very few people), it’s always a delight and a pleasure to re-read your work. I love your style of writing, it’s so captivating and absorbing; you have that especial talent to make people live the story as it’s happening; reading your stories I’ve got the impression to form part of it instead of being a mere observer. I love how perfectly your stories are built, flowing so elegantly from the beginning, with a perfect tempo; always beautifully written, with great descriptions of the situations, using the precise words, and full of fantastic details. Another thing I admire is that your plots are always interesting and credible, for which I’m really grateful. (Some people tend to confound originality with being grotesque and absurd; and sadly, lately there’s a plethora of insufferable stories with ridiculous plots; so thank you for posting your stories again, it’s so refreshing!).

But what I like most is how exquisitely you depict the characters, their personality, their emotions and reactions, how they interact; how real they seem. I especially love in this story Vegeta’s attitude toward Goku.

Magnificent and brilliant work; bravo!
(BTW, my favorite story is Never be alone, I hope you continue with it, I want to know how it will end.)

O.O ....so, does that make Chichi his pimp? J/k. But this is a relatively interesting story if you don't take it too seriously. I've enjoyed the interactions between Goku and Vegeta.

Yet another great story. I really liked this one when I read it before at the gotyaoi site. As good as this one is, I would much prefer if you focused more on Possessions instead. *new reader spoiler* My favorite part is when Vegeta torches the restaurant. That and a snarky Goku is hilarious.