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^_^ Ah! This fic is pure win! :D Just knowing that Roy and Ed are going to try and get back together makes me so very happy!! The part where Ed was calling Winry a bitch made me laugh so much! The girl ain't right sometimes; the name fits perfectly! LOL! I'm now very (im)patiently waiting for the next chapter and Roy and Ed's reunion! :) They'll make it this time! I just know it! *cough*hopeless romantic*cough* :D

Just read chapter 11 Roy's and then Ed's POV and am very happy. Still not sure how this will go and know our boys need to grow a little more but am happy that they are on their way. And they are really talking to each other!! THAT is a definite good sign. Winry does love to be mean to poor little Ed but such is their relationship. Hope this new part to Ed and Roy's relationship will keep on working. Wonder what will happen when Ed finds out what has really been happening to Roy after the car accident. His demotion, his classes, the way others treat Roy will all come as a shock to Ed but I think Ed will get through it but will his guilt complex kick in. Hope this new relationship works...but living together is always a learning experience (and not always a good one) especially when one needs medical help and the other is not used to it and need his own. Also loved the allusion to the forked and hissing tongue...good one.

I kinda had to chuckle in the beginning here when Ed first woke up you said he was "groggery". :) At first, I didn't think that was even a word but it turns out that it is indeed a real word. I think the word you wanted tho was "groggy" as "groggery" is a seedy bar! LOL The Rockbells are working Ed awfully hard (even if it is for his own good) so he's earned the right to be as snarky as he wants with them! Especially Winry! jeez! hormonal much? :) Beating poor Ed up like that just because he wouldn't gossip with her after she had the nerve to bring him milk! nosy and psycho! I LOL'd when Ed called her a bitch! so true! XDD

I liked the way Roy and Ed sent their letters on the military's dime! :D cheapskates! LOL! I read zakai's part of this fic first so I had to used Ed's code to figure out what he said to Roy. If I'd known to read your part first, I wouldn't have had had to do that! :D Meh, it was fun using a code system I hadn't seen, used, or even thought about in ages! :) It made me very happy to see Roy and Ed talking to one another again. Sometimes it's a bit hard to tell which one of them is more miserable. Ed's pain at the moment is mostly physical but Roy is dealing with emotional/psychological pain. One's just as bad as the other if not worse. :( I couldn't believe, after all he'd been thru, that Roy would drink while taking pain pills! O_O! WTF is he thinking?!? It's a thousand wonders it didn't kill him. He's lucky all he did was write pervy stuff in Ed's letter. :) I can't wait for Roy to get to Risembool so he and Ed can finally, FINALLY, talk to one another! :D

Great chapter. Can't wait to read how the meeting between Roy and Ed will go.

I feel kinda silly because this is pretty much the same review I gave the other story, but who cares anyway? A review's a review right? I just wanted to say that I really love this story. I think the characterization is great, and the plot is very immersing. I really hope that you two haven't abandoned these! Keep up the awesome work! Please?

Great chapter. Loved Ed and Roy's first moment together. And really they kinda have Al to thank for that. Can't wait to read how the phone call Ed will make to Roy goes.

There first date was kinda sweet XD
Nice update, look forward to the next one.

Aw man, I was hoping this was finished when I started it. Then again, I'm glad it isn't finished. This is without a doubt the absolute best FMA fic I've ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter! It's just so perfect! Please update again soon!

ch 1-9 great story. Please continue.

It would seem that since I last came by to check your updates that the site now sorts categories. I love your stuff by the way.