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I can't believe I didn't bother reading this before, what was I thinking???!!! This is so good, I love the way you have the two points of view. I can't imagine it's easy and it probably takes a lot of time to do just one chapter but I'm so glad you take the effort 'cos this is amazing.
I keep reading one chapter of yours and then one of zakai's so I can get the full picture without reading the two stories seperately, it's taken me a long time just to get through the 9 chapters here and 8 so far of the other but I just couldn't stop reading it's that good.
I hope you manage to update soon 'cos I can't wait to see what happens to Ed when he gets back home. Oh and I think I'd prefer the wrench to having my hair pulled!!
Ok gotta go read chapter 9 from Roy's POV.

*sigh* I meant to leave this review days ago but, obviously, I didn't. I really have no excuse. I got so frustrated trying to leave one for zakai (AFF kept chopping off and not posting what I wrote) that I put it off 'til it got ridiculous. What is it they say? The road to hell is paved with good intentions? *sigh* I'm so going to hell if that's true... :(

"Divergence is great XD Now, we almost have too different stories, but still the same" hmm. Just so long as this doesn't diverge too much I'll be happy. :) Roy and Ed have got to get back together soon right? right?? *sigh* Yeah, I really feel for Ed now. It's kinda funny, as in ironic, that Ed can't remember what happened to him just before and during the accident and I myself am a bit hazy on the details as well. :) I really should go back and reread some of this so I can remember just what made Roy so mad at Ed to begin with. I don't remember Ed doing anything that bad really. Anything he did do was done unintentionally I'm sure. You make me wanna cry and snuggle Ed while he struggles with how awful Roy is treating him! Ed calling out for Roy as he walks away from him without a backwards glance, heart breaking. stupid Roy! ;_; I mean seriously. How much of a jerk can Roy be by still insisting on breaking up with Ed while he's still in hospital! sheesh! Roy could at least wait until Ed is well and whole again to have this discussion. Pompous ass trying to tell Ed what he should or should not feel and who he should or should not be with! hmmph! So much for treating Ed like an adult and letting him make adult decisions! :P

It was funny when Ed almost cracked that nurse in the head with the IV pole! "Touch that line, and I won't be held accountable." :D Now that's the Ed I know and love! Leave it to Ed to cause mayhem everywhere he goes! XD Him blaming his tears on the drugs as funny too! :) He doesn't want to admit that he's crying because he's so in love so he has to blame it on the drugs! It's so sweet! :) Shame Roy can't see it tho. *sigh* hard-headed idiot. :(

I do love Ed's never say die spirit tho! "You're in for it when I get outta here, you know that right? I'm not going to let you outta my sight. You know all that determination I had for Al? Well, that's all on you now." *evil grin* Oh yes! Roy won't know what hit him! :D I'm especially anxious to see how Ed reacts when he opens his bag and finds that book in there. That will surely encourage him even more! There really is nothing more frustratingly boring than being alone in a hospital. hmm. Well, if nothing else, Ed now has plenty of time to plan the perfect date that will bring them back together!! Go Ed!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

i love it please put some another chappies on kikiko! please please please!

AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON! Plz? I'll be your best friend ^_^

damnit, roy needs to just fess up (cuddles confused ed). at least ed's more honest with his feelings (and he's suppose to be the inexperienced one). continue to great job (off to read zakai's side).

WAHAAAAAAAAAAAA! How can you do this! Evil clifhanger deamonesses! Fight Ed fight! Don't let Roy push you away because he has issues!

Oh! As much pain as this causes me I love it! I thought this was going to be fluffy and it got so heavy and good!

I so have to go read what's going on in Roy's head now!

review for chapter 7

very intense and tragically beautiful. i read the roy POV first, so my emotionswere already blasted raw and i think i may have missed some of the impact (usually i read them in the opposite order, with ed POV first), but this was still intense enough to make me feel a little sick while reading the dialogue between them at the end.

wonderful work!

^^ this is so cool! i look foreward to seeing where you go with it!

O_o? Whoa. You changed the text type. Kinda threw me there for a minute. :) I know I reviewed this at ff but I just wanted to throw you some more encouragement to keep going! I love this fic!!! :D YAY!! *throws confetti* XD I don't think I mentioned it in the other review but it was funny that Ed was put in the children's ward to recover! He's too bad off right now to fully realize where he is but when he does I'm sure he'll be more than a little pissed off. It'll be just one more thing to ruin his day. With Roy abandoning him like this (I've already threatened Roy for his behavior. How dare he do this to Ed!!), having the fact that he is still considered a kid thrown in his face will just make him feel even worse. poor guy. I hope he didn't hurt himself any more than he already is when he fainted there at the end of the chapter! ;_; I hope Roy and Ed manage to fix things between them and get back together where they belong! I don't expect any fluff for them but a happy ending would be nice! Is that too much to ask for? I don't think so. :) ZaKai is such a meanie for torturing them so! LOL XD
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Both points of view are writen very good. Please don't stop this, and I'm hoping against all hope that Ed survives this somehow.