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Please!!! I want to read more!!! It`s very good!! And so sad (snif!!!) Make a happy end!!! Well, just keep writing, you both. Lucky in your lifes....and write!!

OH MY GOD!!!! HOW could you two end it there!!!!!! >< You guys HAVE to update soon. I am DYING here. Okay deep breath... Ok so I REALLLY REALLY like this fic (as you can porbably tell). Not only is there an actual plot line (which I see so rarely these days) but it is also written wonderfully!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon or I swear I will go insane... or more insane than I already am.

Since the first that i came across with was Ed's POV, i'm always reading this first. Your Ed makes a sketch of the situation and messes everything out, and then I go to Roy to see the whole picture, to sort eveything out and clear it. It feels like being part of a game where you play a ball game on your own - you have to be ready to catch it on both sides.
I still need to finish reading ZaKai's ch6 - Roy owns me an explanation, hehe.

All in all - good idea, keep going, good luck, dying to read more.

we're giving you and your cohort the same review
AAARRRGGGHHH!!!!! that's meaner than usual. please come up with the next chapter soon!!!!

Affie and Rysha
whimpering pittifly

Wow, miscommunication up the wazoo here! Geez. Poor Ed and Roy. That accident was well written you know. And the feelings that go through one's minds during relationships is so true its scary. I read Roy's POV too. You guys did an excellent job! Be proud of yourselves. Update soon!

i shall hate you if ed does not live!!! :O

I LOVE this! It is so darling! I HAVE to go read Roy's point of view now! But I have to admit I'm rather partial to stories from Ed's point of view. I just love how real this is, and how stubborn they both are! ZaKai and you are both fantastic authors and I allways look forward to more from you both!

oh great gods of the universe... you've got another great chappie on your hands... Rysh and i were commenting so loudly we woke up the rest of our households (speakerphones need better volume controls) keep up the great work and more please... we can't wait to read the counterpart.

Affie and Rysha

Poor Ed. It's really a shame these two can't manage to communicate better. Also, for some reason, the Eep! made me snicker.

*GASP!!!* Ed threw away all his research on Roy?!?!? He hasn't given up has he? Oh Ed. *hugs Ed* Ed's trying so hard and Roy is making this so difficult. He gets a quick kiss and a grope from Roy and then Roy acts like nothing happened. I love Roy dearly but the man can be such a jackass sometimes. I can't help but think that Ed is going about this all wrong. He's trying to analyze this too much. Roy told him earlier that this experience would be trial and error. There are no really right or wrong answers. Ed, being the scientist that he is however, wants everything to be perfect but it just can't be so. The poor guy is tearing himself apart trying to do the impossible. I mean honestly, would it kill Roy to drop a few hints/pointers about what a "successful date" should be - i.e. what he would like? something? anything? Come on, Roy, throw the kid a bone! (no pun intended I swear! XD)

*smiles* Ed was so adorable with his pad and pencil asking the office ladies (i.e. floozies) about Roy! It took a lot of courage to face that group of hussies all by himself! XD BTW, how old is Ed in this story anyway? You mentioned that Al has his body back but that doesn't really tell me a whole lot. He was acting like a little kid when he hid the papers from Roy. And Lord love him but he's moody as hell! PMS anyone? *ducks under desk* Sorry, Ed, you know it's true! :) Anyway, I was just wondering.

It worries me that Ed's not eating. He's gonna make himself sick doing that and it'll be all Roy's fault for torturing him like this. I hope he'll be OK. I also hope he finds the inspiration to get this date over and done with before it worries him to death! :) Like I told ZaKai, it'll be Valentine's Day is in three weeks and I don't think either one of them will survive this drought that long! :) It might take that long for Ed to get over being mad at Roy though. Valentine's Day would be a good day for them to get back together. (Yeah I know it's cheesy and trite but it is what it is. Sometimes corny's not too bad.) At this rate, either the sexual frustration or one of them saying or doing something stupid will tear them apart. I'd hate for that to happen. The mixed signals and misunderstandings are killing me! It breaks my heart that Ed thinks Roy is cheating on him. T_T
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=