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schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was almost even more painful than Ed's POV! Roy is such an idiot! IDIOT! Oh please let him come to his senses! Please. please let Ed be stubborn and not let him go! OHHHH! I'm ont he edge of my computer chair!
person YourSeme
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:_; just when I thought things were gonna be allright.. aaah! how much more will they suffer...*clings to the story* *still sending prayers to the great yaoi-god to make everything allright~~* XD let me know when it continues~~(oh yeh ^^ and dont forget your story "blind obsession" still especially checking my mailbox for that one every now and then :3 )
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
review for chapter 7

that was...that was...oh my gods, that was intense. you wrote that so well. i absolutely ached with roy. that was actually painful to read.

wonderful work!!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah man. Roy, Roy, Roy. Why couldn't u just say what you were really thinking before you added, go find someone else?? A very engaging chap. I loved it. :)
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah! this is so good! I can't wait for the next chapters!
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even tho I reviewed this over at ff I just want to say that I love this fic! I cried just as hard reading it this time as I did the first time at ff. ;_; (I just skimmed over the review I left at ff and I'm still hoping that Roy and Ed get a happy ending! :D No, I'm not expecting any fluff. I know better than that! :D I just want them back together where they belong!) I could kill Roy for screwing up his own life like this! idiot. Why does Roy think their relationship is over? *sigh* I need to go back and reread. I can't remember. You'd think that having something this traumatic happen to him would make him see things more clearly and want to hold on to what is most precious to him. He knows Ed drank milk for him, he's thinking and dreaming of Ed all the time, he's going out of his way to keep tabs on Ed, he visits Ed every single day and yet somehow he thinks that what they have is over. He wants Ed, he needs Ed, he LOVES Ed! Why won't he admit it?!? Dammit, Roy, be selfish for once! What is there left for you if you don't? Lonely nights, booze, and self destruction that's what. *sigh* I love Roy but he's absolutely killing me! T_T I don't know how Hakuro is getting away with how he's treating Roy. Sounds illegal to me.
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
person YourSeme
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
waaa omg you got me crying behind my computer ;_; like I was having that fight and all roy's troubles myself!
roy's not the bastard..his pride is, thats all, just get rid of that XD. I so really hope they will be oke together!
person Afrieal
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
we're giving you and your cohort the same review
AAARRRGGGHHH!!!!! that's meaner than usual. please come up with the next chapter soon!!!!

Affie and Rysha
whimpering pittifly
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i just read this whole POV and it was soooo good! Truly engaging. And it seemed very real. I myself can sometimes be a bad communicator but only in relationships for some reason. I totally wasn't expected the end part there. Wow. Roy. You fucked up lol. BIGTIME. Do update soon. I'll go ahead and read Ed's POV now. Nice job!
person Christina
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG DO YOU WANT ME TO CRY TOO :( i hate Roy and his over thinking bastardness!!!

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