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December 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I know it's been years, but pretty please update! Dominant!Roy doesn't exist as a rule. This is literally one of 5 fics I've found. I'll give you internet cookies and hot chocolate. :)
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May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There are some simple spelling errors that make certain sentences difficult to read. However, the dialog was perfect and the scene was hot. Just edit it!
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well written and quite hot! i really like the kink - Please keep going and update soon!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hah-hah! (That laugh was triumphant.) Yes! This is exactly what I've been looking for. IMO, there are not enough Royai fics out there where Roy is the dominant one. My opinion is that Riza's dominance is all bluster and bravado, and Roy only puts up with it because he knows that he's in charge where it really matters. Keep it up. I like it, I love it, I want more of it.
Cheers!
- shadow
Cheers!
- shadow
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it can't wait to see more.Also if you do put another fic up about this can you email me please!! LaTeRzZ