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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohh badock and king vegeta this will get interesting
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! A good insight on an interesting character, I like King Vegeta! And I like how things are developing with Bardock, hope you take it much further, hehehe. I also love to see Vegeta squirm over Kakarott, can't wait to see more interaction between them. Update soon!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! XD
And King Vegeta getting interested in Bardock, that is an amusing development. Seems the King and his son have more than just their names in common, ne?
More, yes? ^^
And King Vegeta getting interested in Bardock, that is an amusing development. Seems the King and his son have more than just their names in common, ne?
More, yes? ^^
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oohh plot all around
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this story so far
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting fic i hope to see more soon!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so great, I really want to read how it goes on.
Kakarott have mood swings and his brother must bear it. Poor Raditz.
But I have noticed that the king is a bit careless to gather all people which are essential for the survival of his race on one planet.
The destruction of one planet would be the destruction of the whole race.
If one want to minimize that risk you have to scatter the people on different planets, and no single person should know all those planets, that would be much saver, donīt you think? Or did the king just say he would bring them to one planet to confuse the enemy? If Freaser finds out heīll distroy one planet and he would thing he had won, but he hadnīt. That would be very clever.
In any case I canīt wait how your story goes on.
Please hurry! Will you? ^ ^
Kakarott have mood swings and his brother must bear it. Poor Raditz.
But I have noticed that the king is a bit careless to gather all people which are essential for the survival of his race on one planet.
The destruction of one planet would be the destruction of the whole race.
If one want to minimize that risk you have to scatter the people on different planets, and no single person should know all those planets, that would be much saver, donīt you think? Or did the king just say he would bring them to one planet to confuse the enemy? If Freaser finds out heīll distroy one planet and he would thing he had won, but he hadnīt. That would be very clever.
In any case I canīt wait how your story goes on.
Please hurry! Will you? ^ ^
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is my first DBZ fan fic, and I very much enjoy it. I never really watched DBZ until I started dating my boyfriend. Now I'm annoying him by reading yaoi DBZ. It was funny because he said he wanted me to like it but not like this. So when there is something I don't understand, I just ask him. I love your story so far. The only problem I have is the mispellings, but nobody is prefect. Well until next time, later.(13)
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until you update!!! Update soon!! Please!