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im not usualy a fan of Vegeta/Kakarot pairings...At all. Well to be honest i hate them. But MAN THAT WAS GREAT!

A tad hard to believe that a Lord or in this case a King would be required b law to deflower the 3rd class. I mean, they're the lowest rank. If you gave some explanation on how this law came to be, then the story would be better. You know, some kinky King wants lots of action and passes a law that nobody feels the need to repeal. Anyway, keep up the great work and update SOON! On another note, that Piccolo/Nail story sounds really good.

me love

I am so glad that you choose not to let people to login in order to review. This story is great and I cannot wait for more in the near future.