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by fyrbyrd074

person Chibi_Dilandau
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that last chapter was amazing, Vegetas revenge was perfect for that evil council and i'm so glad he finally opened up to Goku with his love ^_^ well done on writing an incredible fic, i've been a very pleased audience.
person Zofo
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's over! *sobs*

About time the council were thrown out on their heels, loved it :)

Yes, you need to sort King Cold out in a sequel, he needs taking down a peg or two, and I would love to read Vegeta and Goku in ascended form doing just that!

Thanks for the special mention at the end, you made my day! :) Great story, I will be looking for your next with interest.
person MewMew2
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! *claps dramatically* Well, all good thing must come to an end as they say, and that saying has once again been proven quite true. You've done an absolutely phenomenal job through out the creation of the chapters, timing of the post, and everything else in between. Thank you so much for sharing your writing talent, and please continue to do so at your leisure.
person kitkit
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it
person Zofo
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta finally claimed him properly, bout time. Hope he lets Kakarot bite him back soon. Seemed they were at it all night judging on how sore Kakarot was and how many hickeys he had, hehe. Typical of him to be oblivious to them when he woke up, parading himself around like that for all to see :)

So he is to be known as Prince Consort, good choice of title, I like it, plus he's on the council. Hmmm, that's no going to go down well with them. More good news that Raditz gets to be a general, Turles is pregnant, and the Nameks are to stay and become family. Things are definitely looking up.

Aww, liked the round about way Vegeta told Kakarot he loved him. Maybe he will also say the actually words eventually.
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
At least Cold is smart enough to know when to back down in a fight. If Freeza were still alive, I doubt he would be as intelligent. I'm excited that Vegeta is king and I can't wait to see what will happen to Kakarrot.
person Zofo
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kakarot must really love Vegeta if he was still thinking of him during the DP between Nail and Picollo. That would be enough to sway most people so his feelings for him must be very strong.

Loved the confrontation with King Cold. They really showed him didn't they. Sent him home with his tail between his legs. I was like a cheerleader, cheering them on! Vegeta even ascended. Wonderful stuff.

Interesting point as to what is he called now? Queen Kakarot doesn't sound right and he can't be a king as well. Wonder what you will come up with.
person MewMew2
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since I read this, thank you so much for all the updates. You've done an excellent job on this story, and for that I applaud you. It seems like the declining action is starting to occur and thus i'm a little sad about that. Nevertheless, I will continue to R&R, so please update again when you have the time.
person kitkit
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow me love
person Kit451
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Amazing! I loved it! The plot kept me interested and I didn't want to stop reading! When I reached Chapter 37 I looked at it like O.O NUUUUU! This is an amazing story and I just can not wait to read more! Oh please update soon! I usually don't read DBZ and when I do I rarely if ever review... So PLEASE UPDATE SOON! *will be waiting for the next chapter*

Kit451

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