rate_review Reviews

I just thought I'd let you know that somehow your last chapter posted twice on here. It ends and then suddenly it starts all over again from the beginning to the end.

And yeah I've been reading it. :P I didn't like the accidental bonding thing...but the rest of the plot was good.

wonderful

Great fight scene, edge of seat stuff. It was touch and go there for a while, Broly seemed unstoppable and I was holding my breath as he was about to mount Kakarot. So pleased Vegeta finally went Super Saiyan but even that looked like it was in vain. Glad they got him in the end though.

Hope Broly is gone for good now. No sneaky Paragus wishing him back on dragonballs or something, I don't trust him, if there's a way he'll find it.
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Saa!!! Oh crap! No Goku RUN!!! Vegeta go super saiyan somebody do something!!!

Just out of random curiousity how old is Goku?

wow another battle

Ohhh...the intensity is increasing! I'm glad Kakarrot moved the fight away from his children because Broly would most certainly kill them. Argh, he's such a sicko. I hope Kakarrot kicks his butt and I hope that Vegeta will also attain Super Saiyan in response to wanting to protect his mate. Can't wait for the next update!

Nail carried the egg in a pouch! I guess they must be a kinda plant marsupial. That's given me visions of a Piccolo kangaroo (giggles).

Oh, the long awaited confrontation of Kakarott and Broly. Who will be stronger and will Vegeta make it in time if Broly is winning? I'm willing Vegeta on.

I'm on the edge of my seat! Please update soon.

MUAH HAHAHAHAHAHA! yays for Kakarot being super saijin too, DIE BROLLY DIE!

love it

Oh was that a hint that Raditz will be getting together with Turles? I hope so as he's been deprived for so long (pets Raditz's tail to comfort him).

Loved how Vegeta felt Kakarot's contractions, bit like a phantom pregnancy only worse. Made me chuckle.

You gave the cubs really good names, and Vegeta naming them in honor of Kakarot proved how much he respects and loves him (though in keeping with his personality as he would never let any one hear him say that).

I'm still worried about Brolly being stronger than Kakarot as he was in the show so I'm willing Vegeta to reach super saiyan so they can both gang up on him, but will that be enough?

What about Nail's egg, seed, baby, whatever it is, it must be due soon mustn't it, hopefully in the next chapter.
As usual I can't wait for more of your enthralling story.
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