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Yay for an update! I'm so glad they're all together again! Seriously, I was beginning to worry.

I liked that Veggie nickname too. Very nice. Keep up the great work! It's fabulous. ^_^

is there some way Broly could "accidentally-on-purpose" blow himself and Paragus up? i dislike them so much. Wonder what Vegeta's going to do and what will happen to Kakarot when they get back, please hurry and update again soon =D

aaaww so cute

Glad Bardock talked King Vegeta into helping them and was told about Brolli, hope that information gets to Vegeta and Kakarot.

I can't help but wonder if Brolli will be stronger than Kakarot, especially since it seems he will be a fair way into his pregnancy by the time they get home. I'm hoping Vegeta reaches SS soon!

Another great chapter.
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Wonderful. Thank you so much for updating the story, you've done an excellent job in writing it, and I'm sure that you will continue to do so. I eagerly await the next update.

I have to say this last chapter was the best. I really enjoyed it as well as both Vegeta's and King Vegeta's introspections. The lack of 'action' so to speak, I think was a good thing because you got across some very interesting plot devices, such as the seriousness of the king's situation with Paragus and Vegeta's own thoughts concerning his relationship with Kakarrot and how things are going to be when they finally arrive back on Vegeta-sei. I fear that the King's decision to give up his grandson is going to haunt him in a very bad way, even if he meant it as a way to protect his people. And I fear that Vegeta's reluctance in being open about his bonded status with Kakarrot will cause a strain in their relationship when they arrive planet side. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hi! I speak spanish, and my english is very bad, but I can read it and understand it.
So, I apologyze for the mistakes and misspellings in the review.

And WHAT AN AMAZING STORY!!!! I was drawn to it with the first lines:

"It had been a tradition for as long as anyone had known. That a young person of the third class had to be deflowered by the Lord of their area."

In spanish that was called "Derecho de Pernada" and in english was used the french words "Droit de Seigneur" (I saw it at Wiki), and I personally think that that was a really horrible tradition... but HERE it's just so magnificent, ha ha ha!! XD

I REALLY LIKE the form that you gave to this custom or tradition, and how you developed it into a bureaucratic thing:

-"Please remove all of your clothing. The Prince will be with you shortly."
-"I will prepare you for the Prince. And afterwards I will inspect you for the confirmation certificate."

And, later in the story, when you explain how it all started ¡¡That’s SOOO GREAT!!! It began like a historical fact (pollution-few women-abuse of the weak males) and, when the years passed and almost everybody forgot that, it become in a tradition, and later in a law. ¡And That’s FUNKY GREAAAATT!!!! Because this is what happens when you meet a stranger in The Alps!! Eh… I’m sorry, I was thinking in other stuff… I mean, because this is what happens historically… well, not always, but it’s part of the show.

Well, maybe in the first part of the fanfic and in this one that I just mentioned, there was a tiny contradiction, whit the woman, but that’s ok, it doesn’t dull the shine of the story.

One of my favorite-favorite-FAVORITE scenes? First season of Kakarotto and how Vegeta stormed in and claimed him… Again.
MAAAAAAAAAN!!!!! Or WOMAAAAAAANNN!!!! YOU HAVE MY ETERNAL DEVOTION!!!!! I WORSHIP YOU!!!! I have no Words to tell you how I felt my stomach with all the butterflys in it!!! And my heart to, of course. Please, everybody stand up and raise your glasses for the toast: A scene to remember, a vision to die for. CHEEERRRSSS!!!!!! XD XD XD

You know, I really liked Dragon Ball, when Gokú was a boy with tail, and said absurd things like: “My Grandfather died because a monster stepped on him” or they trained doing milk deliveries, an so on… they were so funny!! and in DBZ they almost lost that touch. And I stopped seeing the show because of the endless confrontations… but one can’t really forget the characters, they’re so good.

That’s why I wasn’t very interested in the DBZ fandom… but when you read a GOOD, EXCELENT STORY like this one, you can’t avoid to be hook on a felling… you can’t stop the inevitable… you just fell in love unconditionally. It’s like the gravitation force.

Thank you for this story!! And Thank you for make me a Vegeta/Kakarott fan!!

love it

Stupid as this sounds I do feel sympathetic for the king...

Yay! Goku's pregnant again! and Nail is too!

Please continue!

Oh treacherous goings on in the palace, I love it, though shuddering at the thought of Brolli forcing himself on Kakarot.

It's so unfair that Kakarot can't raise his class despite his power yet Brolli can squirm his way in even though he's crazy. Hopefully Vegeta can change that.
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