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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Raditz! He's so left out of the mating loop! He seriously needs to get some booty, too! Why not pair him up with one of those breeding males that they sent to the safe world? Of course that's just a suggestion...I'm sure you have plans to get him laid too, right?
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry to hear you incident. I hope you recovered fine. this is a lovely chapter. wait to see more.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! The suspense!!
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a brillient fight scene! I was on the edge of my seat.
Did Goku really destroy Frieza or will he return as in the show? Will the ship and all it's occupants survive? How will Goku and Vegeta behave towards each other now? Is the child okay?
So many questions, I really can't wait for the next chapter.
Did Goku really destroy Frieza or will he return as in the show? Will the ship and all it's occupants survive? How will Goku and Vegeta behave towards each other now? Is the child okay?
So many questions, I really can't wait for the next chapter.
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love how you are swapping the humans out for the other characters whilst still keeping true to the show. Excellent.
Damn that RL for not letting you update sooner! :-)
Damn that RL for not letting you update sooner! :-)
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it..the fight is just like in the series only sayian-ish O.O
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"...sex had never felt as good as being inside the tight virgin ass of his monarch."
It's Patriarch, not monarch. Other than that this is friggin fantastic.
It's Patriarch, not monarch. Other than that this is friggin fantastic.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great story will continuously get hits. It should not suprise you considering you have written an action based masterpiece. Congrats!! And thanks for such a good story.