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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another brillient action packed chapter. You shouldn't be surprised at the number of hits with writing like this. Great stuff!
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow me love
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wee! I'm so glad you've updated! You're such a good writer. I love how you incorporate the fight scenes from the show into the story. Beautiful. Keep up the awesome work! *LOVES*
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yipppppyyyy!!! The story continues. I love that they finally made it to the ship.. Now the real fight begins with Freiza. I think Goku will kick his ass when he gets out of that tank thing. I am still loving this story by the way!!
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fight scenes, liked how you kept them true to the show. Sensing Vegeta and Goku might be a bit closer after this (crosses fingers).
Hope you can update soon.
Hope you can update soon.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
**Does a happy dance**YAY! NEw chapters rock!.....wait....now i have to wait for the next one.....
**Hops from one foot to the other**drat i hate waiting.....but I will cause the story is great^^
J-chan
**Hops from one foot to the other**drat i hate waiting.....but I will cause the story is great^^
J-chan
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need more. I'm not greedy... oh hell, yes I am why lie!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The plot gets oh, so thicker!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow the storyline is nearly following the course of the freeze story-line except its..well sayian-ish
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love how you are bringing the show into this. Can't wait for more!