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for A Late Lunch

by nomdeplume

person elhbiker
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my fucking god you have to continue.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much I can not rember when I laughed so hard.That was too cute
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* OMG! that was priceless! XD great story. I love how they threw in the 'egg you on' and 'messing with you.' great way to tie it together. XD
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!!!! Oh! too funny! I can't breathe!!! *falls out of chair laughing* Whew! My head hurts now! *giggles* I started not to read this because it's a RoyHavoc pairing (which I normally do NOT like!) but, since you wrote it, I gave it a chance. LOVED IT!!! Yay for fun with food!!! :D The popsicle was the best! "I think I might have a hard time getting anyone to believe I’m straight after this." Ed honey, the way you were working that popsicle not to mention the cherry stem, I KNOW you're not straight!! LOL!! Don't lie to yourself, baby! (Baby? Who am I? Raine? XD) You wouldn't have gotten this upset over what Roy said if he didn't mean something to you! :) I wondered why Roy squeaked for some reason. Naughty Ed! ;) This was the best revenge possible! First Roy egged Ed on and now he's got egg on his face! priceless!!
Koneko =^.^=
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! That was so funny! And kinda cute, way to go Cain and Ed.

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