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I effing adore this story and I was wondering if there's any chance for it to be continued since it's been almost TWO years... Like I said, I love this and I really want to know what happens next.

I do hope you update soon :( this is my favorite fic that I read that is currently ongoing... hope to read more soon!

-VH

This is really good! I love it. I hope I can read more.... to bad there isn't a story alert on this site (that I know of), because I want to keep reading. You are a good writer, your chapters are long and detailed and keep me interested. You have a natural talent with words and I hope you do something brilliant with it, wether continuing this or starting something original.

Yay, I was happy to check in on this story after keeping it in my favorites for a long time and now there was more to read. Thank you and please keep going. Poor Havoc...I wanna hug him.

This is truly exquisitely written, despite the sad subject matter. You don't beat around the bush and you don't sugar coat things! I truly enjoyed reading it so far! You probably get that a lot, but I hope you update soon!

Just one small thing - you have an excellent grammar, but from time to time you make spelling mistakes. For example, "manour" (spelled like that it means a large country house, usually a possession of some sort of an aristocrat) should be spelled "manner" (behaviour, way, etc.etc.) I am only pointing out because your fic is so good already, avoing these little mistakes can make it absolutely perfect! :D

(8) I love how you wrote Ed and Al, you got their characters down perfectly, actually all of the characterizations work so well. Havoc feeling trapped and backed into a corner and yet he still has a bit of his defiance and then Archer, despite how horrible he is, I can't help but appreciate just how manipulative he's being. Mustang seems truly floored by Ed's observations about Havoc, his reaction when he finds out they're 'dating' (i wonder if he'll be jealous) and then of course what is truly going on isn't going to be pretty. Have I mentioned that I can't wait to see Mustang light Archer's hair on fire (for a start) for what he's done to Havoc, I'm so looking forward to the save Jean part of the story :) Another great chapter, I'm just sorry that I had missed it when it first came out, hopefully that means I won't have to wait as long for the next chapter ;)

Just read chapter 8! When I saw it was up I squealed with excietment, I'm always so happy when you update! But wow, this whole chapter was really intense. I loved the talk between the elrics and roy, so full of tension, they're all so worried! And when Ed and Al ran into Havoc, his expressions and everything were so good :). Archer is such a sick jerk, can't wait to read more! Update soon pleeeease!

Finally, this is updated! I've been waiting so LONG to get the next chapter of this; it's so good. Don't leave us waiting for so long again, okay?

I just stumbled onto this story last night, but I
swear I was glued to the edge of my seat the whole time!
So twisted and dark, but most excellent ^_^
I hope you update soon!
I'm dying to know what happens next!

Wow. Archer is one sick twisted puppy. Obsessed with Havoc much are we, Archer? Guess I can't blame him though. Havoc is hot as hell. I hope Mustang can save him!

Great chapter!