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When I saw you put up chapter 7 I totally fangirled and squeeled for joy. Instead of going directly to that chapter though I reread the whole story. Wow must say though the lemon is not what I expected! More twisted. I figured it'd be more rough and painful like I think Havoc expected it, very nice twist! I hope you get the next chapter up sooner than this last one, I went nuts with waiting. God I wonder what Roy is going to do... Eee! I love this, more please!

I love the story so far!
Please please please update soon!!!!

ack!! i'd forgotten about this story! it's so good. please update soon, i really want to see more of it! mustang has to save poor havoc, he just has to!! well, havoc should have been more... uh... i completely forgot how this story started, so i don't know why archer started it in the first place. hmm. i'll have to reread, but anyway, please post more!!~

Just read chapter 6 again, you so have to update, this fic is extremely addicting! I must know what happens @_@!!!

I have to say I adore this fic... I'm a Havoc Fangurl he's always been my fav FMA character and to see a story that centers round him made me go all fangurl like.... I hope to see some more I'll bookmark to check back in on it I promise...

Keep up the good work

You have no idea how happy I got when I saw you updated this :). I reread the whole thing before reading the new chapter, so much drama, I love it! Please post the chapter sooner :( it about killed me waiting for this one, no joke! Can't wait for the lemon ;D seriously, gonna love it so much... you're a brilliant writer :).

YAY!!! UPDATE!!!! *dances* It was a good one too. Can't wait for you next post!!

So nice to see an update from you it's been awhile :) It looks like things just keep going from bad to worse for Havoc, but Mustang was rather sneaky about trying to find things out, unfortunately it'll probably be too late to stop what may be about to happen. The mind games that Archer has been playing with Havoc add a really great twist to the story, he's got Havoc to the point where it's not going to take much to break him, unfortunately I'm guessing that's all going to happen next chapter.
Such a wonderful story and I can't wait to read the next update ^_^

OOH! you updated! I'm soooo happy. I like how this is progressing, like not getting straight to the real rape, but dealing with other kind of harassment first... Sadly enough, many start with the rape, it often leaves a story a bit hollow. And I really like how you portray Mustang, very believable. Good work! I'll be eagerly waiting for more!

Thanks for the update! You are such a wonderful writer, I look forward to more of this story.