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for Breaking Havoc

by WaterWalker

person Anon
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe archer is being nice..... but his motives are evil.. and cunning. Well i cant wait for the next update!!!!
person Mortimer
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! The long waits in between updates are worth the wait. I want to see Roy save Havoc-sama so badly. My favorite chapters so far are the first two; when Frank beats Jean and when Jean goes home for the first time. Both were very well written. But I really really really loved the part when Roy saw straught through Havoc in I believe chapter 3 when he showed consern for him and brought up Hughs. Nearly broke my heart! I understand that life gets in the way sometimes but if you could up date soon!
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pppppppllllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeeeee update this story.
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...LOVE THIS STORY!
I raced through the thing and now I can't wait until the next installment!
As everyone else is saying POOR HAVOC! Aww the little man's gone through alot hasn't he.
Burn Archer!
Also can't wait until the RoyxHavoc pairing:)
ACE!
person yellow22
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
new chapter soon?
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am SO glad you updated this. I saw and squeeled so loud my mom asked if something was wrong XDD. Oooo I can't wait for the actual rape to commence, I'm highly anticipating it. I'm also anticipating Roy finding out and his reaction, oooo thats gonna be good. I hope you update as quickily as you can, I went nuts waiting for this chapter, no joke @_@. Great story here!
person melissa
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh I love this story but please say you will update again soon!!!! I cant wait to find out what else poor Havoc will have to undure and if Mustang will find out and what he will do!!! ^_^ I just love your story!
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated!
I'm in love with Breaking Havoc!
It's an amazing story with a wonderful plot so far....XD
I can't wait until you get to the RoyxHavoc pairing...XD
Thank you for writing and please try to update soon!
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Havoc, people sure do love to abuse the poor guy in fics don't they?

I love this story, it's very realistic, and your Archer is beyond slimey. (I like my villians truly, truly evil.)

schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is so sad and depressing. I HATE ARCHER!!!! *kills the fuckass* roy needs to find out what's happening and stop it! *cries* havi-chan!! nooo! we'll save you! or roy will! i don't know. someone will save you, i promise, even if i have to force my way into the story, it will be done!~

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