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YAY! You finally updated! Thank you!

I looove this. This is written well, and I like the plot so far. I can't wait to read more.

nooooo my poor havocccc!!!! sniff archer, how dare you do something like that to my havoc!!! anyways...this is a great story!!! cant wait for the next chap. btw, plz forgive my blondeness in this question: this is going to be a royxhavoc or another pairing? i think it shoul be said somewhere but my braind cant register it so....anyways plz update soon!!

Poor Havoc, I want Mustang to find out what happened so that Havoc doesn't have to go through any more of this but I doubt your going to make it that easy for him. For me that second chapter just seemed utterly heartbreaking, Havoc trying to deal with what happened and afraid of anyone else finding out, having to do all of this alone, it's just too sad :(
I have to say that I think the angst is going to kill me, you're certainly living up to your name-twisted, indeed! Despite the difficult subject though, I can't help but be curious about what is going to happen next and look forward to the next update.

Man, you sure do love to torture lt.Havoc don't you? This is good, Archer is the perfect villian, go figure he'd be into s&m in a not quite so kinky but just really horrible way! More please!

very sexy.

Awww, poor Havoc-kun!! Good story so far please continue!

Emi

three words..... Acher must die!!!! interesting start though, I'm curious to see where roy will come into this. *carefully cradles Jean* poor Havoc! I'll be watching for an update!