rate_review Reviews

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i think it´s ....just to short.
dont get me wrong. i know very well, that you did it for a challenge,
but that doesn´t change anything.
as i said, it IS - just - to - short, for my feeling.
I wished, you would have written a complete fanfiction,
from this stuff/your ideas, instead of making this challenge.
because it´s a pitty, that you were limited thereby.
and i think to be limited in that way is not the best thing, in my opinion.
wellllllllll, I would be pleased,
if I could read more from you, sometime.
keep on writing!!! ^^
bye.

This was fun to read DH. :) Is there going to be more?

MOAR!

Seriously. You must write more with this pair. They are my fave. Good job!

so cute..vegeta is in total denial