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Im not really sure how old this story is, or anything really, but I just found it yesterday and read through the whole thing.
It was so well-written, and original. I liked that you kept a lot of the classic-dbz fighting element as well as the love story. Like I said, Im not sure how long ago this was put up, so I dont even know if you'll see this, but it is truly one of the best fanfics I have ever read.
I had a feeling the dragonballs just might come in handy for this story ;)

Wow, that ending was not something I was expecting! I quite enjoyed it though, thank u for the fabulous story!

lol, where have I been the last years? So I've just finished reading your story (I did all chapters in 3 days and yes, I am proud of that because I am a slow ass reader >:3). First of all you hit my guilty pleasure with this Trunks x Goten fic. It was extraordinarily well written - Every movement, thought etc. I liked how you described everything so detailled. Then the plot - Somehow you managed to make me fall for your story. Every chapter was special in it's own way. Whenever one mytery was revealed there was another one that literally forced me read the next chapter! The relationship between Goten & Trunks was just awesome! I like how this one-sided affection of Goten turned into a somehow awkward love between both of them. The sex scenes are without any doubt amazing written, you did a really good job with that and made a fangirl really happy :D Then your story was sometimes funny and sometimes sad. Especially the last chapter made me cry ;_; You see, I am very emotional >_> But I am really happy to see that Goten & Trunks ended up together. At first I was afraid because I really thought Trunks would die and believe me, I HATE sad endings. So now I can sleep peacefully with the thought that Goten & Trunks are not seperated <3 Thank you a lot for writing this story. It's definitely one of my favourites.

Awww... so cute, so enthralling, so awesome, so EVERYTHING! I came here via Veronica's suggested authors and well I don't regret it! This fan fiction had totally captured my attention. (Here I was, searching for Truhan, but I became distracted by this wonderful Truten xD) I loved it! I was captured by chapter one in the park as I watched my little brother, and now I'm being told to shut up in my room while I audibly react. (Laughing, squealing... xD) But this was just wonderful! I loved the logic, Trunks' personality, I loved the mystery, I loved the slightly horrifying images, I loved the fluff, the smut, I can't even list everything that I loved about this! It made me squee in delight and groan when I had to separate from it... Great job!

HOLY SHIT !!!!!!!!!! that was a great story i thought trunks died when it said the scent of death filled the air so i stoped reading and cryed like a like a litte baby but then i got the courge to finsh the story and i cried again this time alot harder with tears of joy man you could have not do any better i was on the edge of my seat from chapter one thank you so much for the time and effort you up into it thank you i loved it

a really awesome story, as all stories i´ve read from you yet. your style of writing and your ideas are special in my opinion and it´s just great to read your works.
i badly hope you´re writing further.
i think you already did create your own characters, but still giving their dbz names...
that´s sad in a way, even if i do very much enjoy your DB ff´s. a lot!
so why not put your very own characteres in a original story and publishing? there are so many links to publishing houses where you could send your stuff to. http://www.fireangels.net/english/submissions.php
( it´s a german publishing house, searching for authors and also original yaoi artists ) maybe you should take a look if you´re interested.
as i said, i so much enjoyed your stuff, keep on writing, please! ^^

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I couldn't agree more with nana666...this story and Lucid are by far and away the best dbz fanfic i've ever read. Your story lines REALLY get in my head. I am a little late getting on the dragonball train, and I know you last updated these stories a while ago, but I was just overwhelmed by them and had to post this review. And may I just say, hats off to your ability to write sex scenes. They are fuckin' AMAZING. Thanks to you, I don't even enjoy real sex anymore, haha. All I want to do is read your TrunksxGoten/MiraixGohan stories :-P

HOMG YES YES YES <3

Holy... I sure as hell wasn't predicting that! I loved it so much! It's amazing how people never remember the Dragon Balls ¬¬ glad you did! I even took off my make up 'cause I was expecting to cry at the end... but I'm VERY glad I didn't. It's really an amazing story, and I kinda liked the excitment of waiting for the last chapters ¦D this one and Lucid are the best things I read this year and, I don't know, even though my fave couple is Trunks x Goten, I really like the Gohan from Lucid, he's great (well, of course MTrunks x Gohan is awesome too)
Write more, please!
Love,
Nana666

ooh...a brilliant ending. Very interesting way to get through that pesky Trunks problem without completely destroying poor Goten. Great story. Looking forward to your next work. ^-^