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Wow...that was one exciting lemon in this chapter! :) mmmm, I am glad it turned out Goten enjoyed it, rather than having to endure it.


And I must say, that was one clever usage of the dragon balls! You were right, I did like how this ended! :) Awesome story Chayron! Looking forward to more good works from you.

That was a good story. I didn't think it would resolve this way.lol I was starting to feel depressed for Goten. I liked how it was developed. Keep up the good work!

that was amazing. i loved how you ended it, w/out killing the nice Trunks and letting him stay with Goten. i almost died when Gohan killed Trunks...that is, until i kept reading. You're an amazing writer. The way you develop the characters and keep them consistent is amazing, and the plot was crazy and unpredictable. I loved this story. Keep writing, and i'll be waiting for your next DBZ Fanfic! (preferably of Trunks/Goten :D)
ps. thanks for the author suggestions.

okay so i've been reading this fic from the beggining and i have to say that i have loved every chapter and the ending OMG IT WAS SAD BUT GUD AND I CAN JUST SAY U R AWESUM!!!!!!!!~ hehe tym to tone it down ne~ ur just da best and i wub <3 this fic

You updated! I'm so glad. Really loved this chapter, and thanks for answering my questions.
I'm started to get a bit loosened up about m-preg now hehe so I'll probably end up reading the rest of your fics as soon as I finish scan the rest of the DBZ yaoi section of this site (thank god I'm already at page 34, I had no idea there was 39 pages. I guess yaoi is really loved).
I'm working on my own Goten x Trunks right now and I don't even know where is it going, but I guess I'll post it when I'm sure I'll be able to finish it.
Well, thanks and hope you have more wonderful stories coming up!

*SOBS* I don't want this Trunks to GO!!!! :( He's so good with Goten. I wish it didn't have to be that way!

oooh...that doesn't bode well. That doesn't bode well at all.
I have decided that Trunks is terribly confusing. I can't quite figure out his feelings, and thusly I can't quite decide whether I like him or not. I'm very worried about how much Goten could end up hurt as a result of all of this, physically and emotionally.

Looks like more of the old Trunks is coming through every day. It would be shocking if the old trunks popped out for a moment during sex. O.0

Looking forward to the next chapter.

another great chapter! Oh no, the other Trunks is returning!!! Is this going to end happily? I can't wait until next Friday!!! I'm a little confused though, as to why Goku and Gohan didn't get along before (I probably missed it somewhere in the other chapters). I love how when I'm reading this story, it feels like it could possibly be happening somewhere. It doesn't sound fictional at all! (except the Dende part and stuff but that's just DBZ right?) By the way, can you suggest any other authors that write DBZ that I should read? It's amazing to read such good stories and I just can't get enough of it! I'll be eagerly awaiting next Friday...

ok, i just had to review your story. i've actually never written a review and made an account so i could tell you how in love i am w/ this story! it's so amazing! you actually have a plot (and it's not a totally predictable one either) and i wanna see the ending! i cant wait for you next update! make it soon please so i dont die!