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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating this story. I'm excited to see how the relationship between Goten and Trunks changes now that they have more of a stable attraction between them. What will you do next.........
schedule
July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this chapter makes me worried. Goten is becoming attracted to Trunks, and from what I have seen as far as perspectives, I am uncertain Trunks will return those feelings.
EEP!
It was nice to see them dancing though. And Trunks sticking up for Goten (and possibly himself)
EEP!
It was nice to see them dancing though. And Trunks sticking up for Goten (and possibly himself)
schedule
July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, so many interesting things going on, and I still have no clue as to where they are leading.
So, I want to read more! :P
So, I want to read more! :P
schedule
July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This set of chapters gets more and more interesting. I look forward to more. Gotta run. :)
schedule
June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEE! What a roller coaster ride. What was Goku trying to do? Other than keep Trunks there long enough for the others to find them?
Ah. :) I loved the cuddle moment between Trunks and Goten. *sighs*
I think I like Gohan as the almost silent observer.
Ah. :) I loved the cuddle moment between Trunks and Goten. *sighs*
I think I like Gohan as the almost silent observer.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I passed over this story for a bit, thinking it was a bit cliche. You know the whole woke up has to relearn everything over again thing. However, this is refreshingly different! I love the mystery element, I'm completely hooked! I wanna know whats up with Bulma and Goku seems to be acting weird. Just what has the other Trunks been up to. God, all these questions! I do hope that everything turns out well. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done. This is quite an intriguing development. I wonder why Trunks had all those extra things set up.
Looking forward to more. :)
Looking forward to more. :)
schedule
June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ouhm, i didnt get that. ^^°
thankies you for the explanation!!^^
i really thought that there were some evil plans, calculations
or something for whatever on that cd and that trunks had destroyed
it because he knew, that goten is absolutely right by behaving passive
and not trusting him.
i thought he felt guilty and anger with himself /
the other trunks that he´d screwed up the relationship
between himself and goten and that the "new trunks" can´t fix it so easily now.
he was so schocked by what he´ve found after he´d hacked the
hidden information on his own laptop.
thats the reason why i came up with that
"evil plan on a cd"- thing.
i am relieved now, that there isnt something!
err...well yah.
even if there never WAS something. XDDD
the last chapter was great!! uuuhuuuhu! ^^ i love trunks
cooleness. you gave him such a adorable mixture made of cooleness,
intelligence and sometimes with a little touch of an five year old,
who just loves to playing games with everyone. very sexy, very interesting!just great!
the conversation between him and that kanou was just awesome and a good
playground for his charakter for my feeling!
i really enjoyed that. d^^b well and the passport thing. ummmh.
wow. ~.~ it seems to me that he´s trying to totally get rid off his other self, now.
i dont have a clue if that is good thing or not. maybe it is, maybe it´s making things
worse.
i dont want to know whats happen when his other half decides to show up again,
or if he begins to remember things.
i doupt that one is able to "reborn" himself in that way,
without getting serious problems on his hand.
all those visible changes and now even another passport
to change his own identety completely.
hopefully it works for trunks himself either.
i doupt that it will work on goten.
well, trunks maybe can change a lot of things but not gotens memories, i think.
dont know if that will work so well.
whaa, i really hope it´s turning out good for both of them.
but i can say that your story becomes more
and more interesting with every new updated chapter!!! ^^
you´re very welcome! :D
i cant read your stories
without leaving a comment, you know.
yah. and it seems that my comment are becomming
longer and longer.
i really wonder, why this "to write in english
shortens the sentences"- thing- doesnt work in my case.
very unfair.
umm. okay in my mother tangue it´s worse, tough.
please keep on, i am looking forward
the next chapter!
bye :)
thankies you for the explanation!!^^
i really thought that there were some evil plans, calculations
or something for whatever on that cd and that trunks had destroyed
it because he knew, that goten is absolutely right by behaving passive
and not trusting him.
i thought he felt guilty and anger with himself /
the other trunks that he´d screwed up the relationship
between himself and goten and that the "new trunks" can´t fix it so easily now.
he was so schocked by what he´ve found after he´d hacked the
hidden information on his own laptop.
thats the reason why i came up with that
"evil plan on a cd"- thing.
i am relieved now, that there isnt something!
err...well yah.
even if there never WAS something. XDDD
the last chapter was great!! uuuhuuuhu! ^^ i love trunks
cooleness. you gave him such a adorable mixture made of cooleness,
intelligence and sometimes with a little touch of an five year old,
who just loves to playing games with everyone. very sexy, very interesting!just great!
the conversation between him and that kanou was just awesome and a good
playground for his charakter for my feeling!
i really enjoyed that. d^^b well and the passport thing. ummmh.
wow. ~.~ it seems to me that he´s trying to totally get rid off his other self, now.
i dont have a clue if that is good thing or not. maybe it is, maybe it´s making things
worse.
i dont want to know whats happen when his other half decides to show up again,
or if he begins to remember things.
i doupt that one is able to "reborn" himself in that way,
without getting serious problems on his hand.
all those visible changes and now even another passport
to change his own identety completely.
hopefully it works for trunks himself either.
i doupt that it will work on goten.
well, trunks maybe can change a lot of things but not gotens memories, i think.
dont know if that will work so well.
whaa, i really hope it´s turning out good for both of them.
but i can say that your story becomes more
and more interesting with every new updated chapter!!! ^^
you´re very welcome! :D
i cant read your stories
without leaving a comment, you know.
yah. and it seems that my comment are becomming
longer and longer.
i really wonder, why this "to write in english
shortens the sentences"- thing- doesnt work in my case.
very unfair.
umm. okay in my mother tangue it´s worse, tough.
please keep on, i am looking forward
the next chapter!
bye :)
schedule
June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes...I want to know the answers to all of these things at least as much as Trunks does!
I hope this passport thing turns out okay. :(
I hope this passport thing turns out okay. :(
schedule
June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wha...?! three complete dessertations in such a short time ôO wow that´s what i would call unbelievable unfair now i´m sure i dont like him. no matter what he will do next XDDD
well,now i think i know what you´ve meant by `goten doesnt know EVERTHING about the trunks he felt in love with. that cd. ...i´m bloody curious what it is about.
and if even trunks himself get worried when he found out,what he´d done,than it surely is dangerous. i think otherwise trunks wouldnt have freaked out like that and destroyed the cd after goten left. oh and whats more, i really love, what happened between goten and trunks now. it´s very interesting to read, that trunks is trying to make son goten trust him. but on the other hand goten now seems to become more and more ...umm, passive? errrh, well or at least i think, that he tries to be passive. more then before, i think. well everthing between trunks and goten seems to be very fragile and everthing is unsure and kind of insecure.
gwaah. i just can hope, that the cd will not destroy everything what´s left to built up a new friendship...looove! *-;* *smirk*
umm. but i wonder, what could have been saved on that cd, that it is so much dangerous and even able to shock trunks himself when he found out what he´d done. ôO` a bomb!? a killerandroid?! gen manipulation stuff with some peoples, or something? O.O
i thought that, because one of the dessertations was about that gen stuff, ne? gods, i hope that he wasnt going to do experiments on goten or stuff like that. weird imagination though. ^^° but anyways. he destroyed the cd. gooood. :D so if there isnt still existing a copy, it will hopefully be alright, then! :D
yeap, i have to wait for the next chapter and i can say, that i´m enyoing to wait for it.
you´ve done a really adorable job so far and as i said, i´m bloooooooody curious, what will happen next! i love to know nothing clearly! *giggle* very exciting and it´s just thrilling me out of my chair!! *loves it* í´m looking forward the next chapter! d^-^b Please keep on!
bye! :)
well,now i think i know what you´ve meant by `goten doesnt know EVERTHING about the trunks he felt in love with. that cd. ...i´m bloody curious what it is about.
and if even trunks himself get worried when he found out,what he´d done,than it surely is dangerous. i think otherwise trunks wouldnt have freaked out like that and destroyed the cd after goten left. oh and whats more, i really love, what happened between goten and trunks now. it´s very interesting to read, that trunks is trying to make son goten trust him. but on the other hand goten now seems to become more and more ...umm, passive? errrh, well or at least i think, that he tries to be passive. more then before, i think. well everthing between trunks and goten seems to be very fragile and everthing is unsure and kind of insecure.
gwaah. i just can hope, that the cd will not destroy everything what´s left to built up a new friendship...looove! *-;* *smirk*
umm. but i wonder, what could have been saved on that cd, that it is so much dangerous and even able to shock trunks himself when he found out what he´d done. ôO` a bomb!? a killerandroid?! gen manipulation stuff with some peoples, or something? O.O
i thought that, because one of the dessertations was about that gen stuff, ne? gods, i hope that he wasnt going to do experiments on goten or stuff like that. weird imagination though. ^^° but anyways. he destroyed the cd. gooood. :D so if there isnt still existing a copy, it will hopefully be alright, then! :D
yeap, i have to wait for the next chapter and i can say, that i´m enyoing to wait for it.
you´ve done a really adorable job so far and as i said, i´m bloooooooody curious, what will happen next! i love to know nothing clearly! *giggle* very exciting and it´s just thrilling me out of my chair!! *loves it* í´m looking forward the next chapter! d^-^b Please keep on!
bye! :)