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wow...not THIS is getting interesting! WHOOT! :) PLOT! YAY!

okay, all of your stories leave me cursing the end of each chapter and leave me impatient for the next, but this one is the WORST for it!!! Its got so many little mysteries going on, and I just can't wait to find out more, and the resolutions of them. I really look forward to the next chapter.

waaah! ^x^ he dyed his hair black and has a new haircut! uhh, wow that´s a shame. i loved his violet hair a lot. but well. i´m sure, trunks will always be a sugarcutie pie, now matter if he has green,blue,violet or black hair, right? yessss. *smirks* and i´m also sure that it will help him and maybe all the other ones to see that he´s different now, and not only inside. heck, i still dont know what i´ve to think about him. i like the new trunks, but sometimes he acts so err...deceitful. actually very deceitful. ôO but maybe he´s just to clever for his own good.
HA! so he WAS dangerous!! Uhmmm. but than i wonder why goten is so fearless and behaves so normal in his near, from the very beginning on. i mean he couldn´t know in the beginning, that "his" trunks is "gone", could he? but goten kissed him anyway. well, goten loves trunks. but to risk that he maybe could have been killed, becuase of that kiss...and if trunks was that dangerous.. i guess, it has to do with what happend three years ago, right? maybe everything has to do with that!? mwahh. ^O^ it just confusing to no end. sooo goooood!! but so verrry exciting at the same time! it really thrills me not to know what´s going on and what the other trunks did, before his accident had happened. well and how the last chapter had ended was a little mindopener, for me. because as a reader i only knew the "new" trunks, not the other one. wasnt easy for me to get a grip on this twoperson- thing, before.
but as i read the last chapter, i dont know, but it has helped me to understand him better.
err. or at least, i think i did. ^^ ...the truth is outthere... *giggle*
soooo, i can´t wait for the next chapter!! and i´m sure that i cant get more curious. i really cant.
please keep on. bye d^^b

Wow...a whole lot of self analyzing going on in this chapter. I liked it.

Interesting turn of events. I want more! :)

wow, your ideas are just adorable, you know ?!? ^^ there are already so many headnuts to think about. :) god. i cant wait, to finally know, what happened three years ago, between goten and trunks. and there happened also something between goten and his dad, right?? it seems to me, that they had have a querrel or maybe something more serious. *.+ and maybe because of trunks?...??
well.i really wonder, why everybody is tryiing to hide the fact, that Trunks has SSJ Powers. i dont think, that he would freak out or something... that´s weird. i dont have a clue, why nobody tells him, because if they would simply tell him, it would be easier for all of them, including trunks himself, wouldnt it?
and than those blood tests...was the "other trunks" dangerous? stronger than usually AND dangerous?? hmm. ugwaah. indeed verrrrrrry mysterious. and how i LOVE it! *grins* please, update soon. ^^
i am looking forward the next chapter. i am more than just curious what will happen next.
bye.

Well, this was a fun, exciting chapter. I wonder how long Trunks will continue to do these things. Or if/when he remembers who he was, if he will return to being the same.

I found it interesting he talks about his past self in the third person.

Very good. I love that both of the Trunks' have effects on Goten that he's not sure he likes and Gohan...that's a mystery between him and our lavender haired boy genius. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Ja'ne.

Intriguing chapter. Trunks knows bits and pieces more than he's letting on. I wonder what he's going to do next. Goten seems to be getting along well with Trunks... so far.

Keep it up! :)

:) I like this very much. The concept is fun, and there are going to be all sorts of opportunities for chaos and misunderstanding.