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schedule
July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH, I thought this was sweet and I liked the format you wrote it in. Look forward to more of your stories.
schedule
June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully adoribly and heartwarming at the end. Very well written. I like it a lot :)
schedule
May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. ^_^ It was very hot. I also loved how you wrote Ed's thoughts in this. Not only was it hot, but it was entertaining and a little sweet there at the end.
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- Z
schedule
May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. Beautiful. Just the right amount of everything. How completely he owns him makes me shiver.
Beautifully done. As always.
Beautifully done. As always.
schedule
May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I was entertained.
schedule
May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ed is so focused, almost analytical in his understanding of Roy and his habits. I like how he's still a bit sensitive about the height difference but enjoys his own power too. Awesome, as always. (and a better comment this time!)