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SQEEEE! oh mi god i loved this! its so well written, and the characters are so...in character! you managed to make sweet little angelic al into a manslut without him breaking character at all!...im pretty sure thats every al fan's dream XD
*sniff* this is the first fanfiction ive read all the way to the end in years. ive been reading bl and yaoi since i was fourteen, and the older i got, the more i noticed fanfictions that were ooc, badly written, didnt make sense, ect, till i just gave up on the quest of good quality fanfiction and stopped reading. i was bored recently, and googled edroy fanfiction, and clicked one of the top links, and i was instantly addicted to your style and talent! you, my friend, have restored my faith in fanfiction ;-; thankyou so much

Wow. I was extremely impressed with this fic. I haven't read fanfics in SO long because 99% of them tend to be crappy, OOC, or both. This one is the total opposite. They were both so in character I could practically HEAR them as I was reading. Amazing work, really.

omg this is the first review I've written in a long time. Your story deserved it though. Wow, I love your writing. Very simple and very sexy. I would say write more for this but I think it wouldnt make it as powerfully sexy. :] Loved it though <3

Ellie

What a blast! Not many cliches. To the point. Believable characters. *big grin*

Oh my God... I could not stop laughing--and I'm *still* blushing! Al's a man-whore. XD And I love him so much more for it, too! :D And dirty little Ed, watching that! Tsk tsk!

Oh dear, the story ended just how I wanted, no sex, just future and 'sight' on Ed's part. Now I'm waiting for the one-shots... will you tell us by sending us an e-mail just the way you did on this one?
Did you know I haven't checked your LJ yet? I don't have time right now, but I will someday...
I enjoyed this fic so much... and will tell other Spanish-speakers I know who do like works like yours and can read in English... see? more fans!!!
Take care, I'll read your other works you posted next month... I'm not in my country right now...
hugs and kisses and all the good luck possible... mua!!! Bye

loved the ending but I didnt get any smex ur an awesome writer

Nice resolution! Love that Ed gets some eyesight back.

thank u for telling me about the update and its done wat!!!!! how bout a sequel or something it can be only a smut scene if u like lol ... i wouldn't mind and im sure others wouldn't either lol

n e way great story tho ... hope u write other ones like this as well but for well different categories ... say like eyeshield 21 lol
just suggestion *thumbs up*

lovely work, sweets. i'll miss seeing the updates in my inbox, but i do love how you wrapped it up. i look forward to anything else you write.

i'm not on AFF.net as much as i used to be, though, so i'd love it if you drop me a line the next time you work on any of your FMA pieces.