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*sobs uncontrollably* Ed's blind!!! *collapses from the grief* Damn you Fletcher you sorry brat! Look at what you've done! *cries* Oh I hope it's only temporary and that once his eyes are washed out and treated he'll get better! I have this sneaking suspicion that Roy is about to be found out tho. I see him going to the hospital to visit Ed, having Ed touch him somehow (his sense of touch [smell too] will be hightened with his eyes bandaged), and Ed starting to put the pieces together about his mystery man. Still not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing! Can't wait to see what happens tho! :)

On a lighter note, I will never look at playground equipment the same way ever again! XD

Oh please add me to the updating list. I absolutely love your story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Names Kage and my address is dragonfire10514@yahoo.com ( I really hope Roy confesses to Ed ^.^)

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! ED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries*
you can't leave it now though. need to know what happens next!

please come back with more soon

Ed is blind...? ED IS BLIND?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

NO. EFFING. WAY.

Please update soon, so that I know whether to kiss you or...well, do something else less pleasant. (~.^)

Loved this chapter, except for the last part. (^^,)

Poor Ed! I hope he isn't blind for life! Wonder what Roy and Al will make of this. Will things change between them? Really looking forward to the next chapter.

well, i didn't expect that twist. but i like it!

and even if it was a bit of a wait, i was delighted to see this update. :D

are you shitting me? honestly you end the chapter there? WHY? i need more than than for a fanficfix!!!! >.< please hurry with the next chapter. i need more
serpen

Wow this chapter was so incredibly emotional. I really liked it and I can't help but feel bad for Ed at the end. It seems like that hope of his eyes clearing is really easy to understand...and feel. Awesome chapter ^_^ as usual.

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thanks for sharing.

OMG that chapter was probably your best yet!! So much Angst an emotion flowed from you words. PLEASE PLEASE dont let Ed be blind permenatly . . .I couldn't take it if he was *sobs fo Edo* I hope the teaches Russell a lesson about being such an ass to Ed. I hope Ed can work things out with Al...poor Al when he finds out this accident happened he is goning to feel so guilty...


Great job and I can't wait for the next chappie!!

Onylight was me OnyxLight...my x key is on the fritz!

Any way this fic rocks and it only seems to get better as it goes along!!