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oh...my...gosh! Ed's blind!? oh no...that sucks, but i love the chapter and it was well worth the wait!

Oh. My. God.

I know EXACTLY what you're doing with this, and GODDAMN.

No way! Has it really been that long since you last updated? It sure doesn't feel like it.

Awesome as always!

This chapter was pretty much amazing. I love plot, and your stories are the best mix of plot and smut.

It's so sad that happened to Ed! I hope his sight does come back... eventually. And, I hope he and Al make up.

Keep up the good work! I look forward to future chapters for all your stories.

Hey, so you passed from a super-hot scene to... wow... a movie-dramatic-like scene. Poor Ed. This fic is so psychological...
Anyway, let that mystery man appear and hold Ed again... he deserves everything he wants after what he's just done...
And if you don't find him, just tell me, okay? I can hold him too... bye

It's so hard to find a good FMA fic that keeps Roy in character. I think this is one of the best I've read. I'm hoping that you will continue to be able to update, even if it is a little slower than you want. I can't wait until Roy's identity is known. If possible, please add me to the mailing list. My address is attached.

patiently waiting,
chi

Wow. I love this story! At first I was sceptical as I'm not a fan of the Roy/Ed pairing, (much prefer Envy/Ed NCS as it just FITS) but this really has me hooked. I really never thought Ed would be the kind of person to openly accept this kind of attention, but the way you have written it has changed my attitude completely and I really don't know how I thought otherwise. As much as I like the story though, I feel that things progressed a bit fast for my liking. Some of the things that Roy had Ed do (the Hooker bit sticks in my mind here) would be things that I would see Ed going 'The hell? No way!' even if it did mean getting laid. Then again, I'm not particularly into that myself so who is to say that he wouldn't? Doesn't matter, point is that this story rocks and it extremely well written. It's sad that you are having trouble finding time to write this, but in my opinion, as long as you are happy with the story and things are progressing as you want them too, take as long as you like to bring out the next chapter. People with thank you for the extra effort! (At least they SHOULD be thanking you...)

Anyway, keep it up and I'd love to hear when you get the next chapter out. Here's my email: sheidow.dragon@gmail.com

Thanks again for a great story! I'll be checking your other stuff out so expect more reviews from me! :)

hey, i love the story so far. Please put me on the update list? I want to know what will happen.

neloraven(at)gmail(dot)com

I loved this chapter. I'm actually embarrassed to admit that i cried when ed was laying himself open like that. ^^; I'm such a terrible sap, that's my dark little secret, i'm a sap! XD

I re-read ch 9... Aahhh!! it's great. Please update soon!

Great chapter but terrible cliff hanger! Please update soon! I like the story so far, even with the kink but I am hoping for a happy ending :)