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OMG! I'm freakin out in my socks!!! DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE, this fic is so good! Can't wait to read the next chapter, and I hope that it isn't something bad that is taking up your time. If it's suttin like work, well, good for you! ^^

Anyway, till next time! Update soon!

I love this story. At first I thought it wouldn't have much plot, but it has gotten really interesting. I love where it is going and quite honestly I've been having a stressful week so you made me tear up with Ed's little break down. Love it great stuff.

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It was a fantastic chapter, except, I WAS EXPECTING SEX AND DIDN'T GET ANY! GAH!

I love how tense this chpater was! It built up so well and it's going to make the next chapter oh so good!

You know, at first this was just a secret guilty pleasure of mine but this has turned into what could be called...

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... a LOVE story.

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xD

ZaKai, you're the only one who could pull this shit off. Really.

I know you won't reply to this one, but it's okay, I only want you to read it.
This chapter was FULL of emotions and reactions and... realizations...
Roy and Ed will have a turn, I mean saying things so openly like Ed did creates some kind of bond, because Roy knows very well Ed would not tell anybody about his inner self and Ed finally trusting a stranger who won't be a stranger anymore after that sharing of information.
And... you made me remember of Pretty Woman, when Vivian didn't kiss his clients on the lips because it was too personal. I loved that similarity in this fic, just what the ending needed, a kind of seal between them, yet not one at all.
And it was better to not show the explicit sex scenes in the end, because it would have ruined what I felt after the kiss... bye

oh my god does not even come close to how i feel right now. that was a spectacular chapter. the emotions came up off the page. the lack of the two of them doing anything just emphasized what they did do.

i am humbled by your skill.

and can not wait for the next chapter.

your faithful reader serpen

.......Bad Roy. Bad bad bad bad. Man now I hope Ed NEVER finds out because if he dores roy is screwed....and not literally. Excellent update. Lets you know how Ed is doing and avenhints at just how much Roy cares for him...and how much Ed doesnt care for Roy. Thanks for updating!

Great chapter as always. I don't know who to feel more sorry for, Ed or Mustang. Looking forward to finding out what will happen next between the and between Ed and Al.

Oh this chapter more than made up for the wait my dear. This was awesome!! I loved how you showed us all exactly how shitty Ed was feeling and you did it all while keeping our favorite blonde shorty true to form!.

And Roy kissing Ed was a shock to me I can so see him slowly falling for the blond now. I also can't believe what an ass Russell was WOW he brought new meaning to asshole big time. Wanted to reach in the story and slap him myself.

Can’t wait for more (but you know I will) Well Done and Kudos!

PS- and shame on ROy for slipping up on the cologne... this should get really interesting now.

Chapter 9 is a good chapter especially with plot and characterization. Here the story is turning in a different direction. Poor Ed...I feel his pain so much. Hopefully Roy is not taking too much advantage of Ed with this newfound knowledge. Roy needs to understand that our actions have unseen effects on others. There are times we have unknowingly or semiunknowingly hurt others. Al has changed so much and Ed is not the only one not talking. Roy is still a manipulator but hopefully he will learn not to control others so much. Russell did not stop Ed so he needs to mellow a little. Ed is just at a crossroad in his life and may be burning out. Maybe he does need to leave the military (for awhile). Surprised he has not figured out that it is Roy...but he is getting there. Hopefully Ed's life will start turning around. Another good story. Another good chapter. As usual. Hope you can find some time to write...you seem to enjoy it so much. I did not know how you found the time to answer all your reviewers...if we had to pick story or answering review questions we will pick your story every time. Keep up the good work.