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hmm, i wonder how roy is going to react! could u please include me in ur email update, thanks

This is one of my absolute favorite stories!! I can't wait for more! You're doing an extremely good job, and your writing is flawless and clean, and you have a nice subtle way of painting the settings without choking the story with description. One thing I really like is that you keep everyone in the character you put them in...that is, you portray your characters a certain way, and stick to it. I know the story's coming to a close, but I'm really hoping we get to see (quite) a few more of Roy's crazy kinks before you finish!!

Omg! I love this story! Its really well written, and I'm always giggling about Roy and his teasing poor Ed XD -heart- I can't wait for the next chapter, Will you put me on the email notification please? demonduckum@yahoo.com Thanks a bunch!

umm, my email isn't hidden so feel free to send me an email to inform me when your story is updated. Other than that I don't really have any suggestions, it is good so far. I would like to see Roy and Ed end up together by the end but if thats not what you have planned oh well for me. Also this is the first fanfic i've read with Roy being such a sadist, i like it, please keep up the good work.

OMG!!! I LOVE THIS!!! I can't wait till ya update again. I'm dyin 2 know if Edward ever finds out that he's been sleepin with Ryo and how he will react 2 it lol.

OMG I LOVE this story! It's so amazing! ^^ <3
Would you please email me when you update next? My email is yaoifan13@yahoo.com. Thanks!

Will you please add me to the update email list? My email is edelricfan [at] gmail. com Thanks!

aw... you just gotta feel so sorry for ed. it's kinda sad that a secret lover is the only good thing in his life. but i have to wonder how roy feels, you know? is ed the only good thing in his life? a subtle clue that he and ed belong together?

i am such a sap, lol. and you know, even if there wasn't some hardcore sex in this chapter, i absolutely loved it! i've discovered lately something about myself that's been true for a long time; i love plot above sex. yes i do, and this chapter embodies that, i swear. because it gives so much insight to ed's thought process and true feelings, while still being hot with the tantalizing bits, pieces, and innuendos you send our way. basically, this, for me, was like, the perfect chapter.

thanks for sharing, and i look forward to your next update!

Wonderful! I thought for sure that Ed would figure out what was up when Roy grabbed him like that. I have to say I'm really sad to hear that you're getting toward the end, but damn, it's been a good ride.

well, that's going to leave some tension laying around now. >:D