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OMG!!!!!
I really love every stories you write, you know that, but this is well, too much attractive to read, i love royed,and this ed i love him,i just wanna give him a hug , but he probably kickme out,=P and roy be more a jerk seems imposible =P, please i wanna be in the update list. padfoot_21@yahoo.com.mx. its a possibility to turn a happy ending?? =)

God I hate Russel. what a douche. look at the opportunity you hand hi and he scurries off like a scared bunny. sigh. moron. although am curious to how roy will react. will he be possessive and jealous or intrigued and interested his "pet" is starting to branch out. oh look pretty picture of Russel and ed both kneeling naked side by side blind folded in front of roy. yum. thanks for this story. i'm going to miss it when its done but i am very very curious to how it will end.

later
saint

^.^ another great chapter. I am wondering how Ed will take it all in when he pieces it together or just finds out in general. well thanks for another great chappy!

Yay! I was worried Ed was going to get together with Russel (nooooo!). Ace chapter! Oooo Mustang accidentally dropping hints, can't wait till nex chappy! Loving it!

yup yup yup mustang you is gonna get yourself found out meng! This was kind of a 'downer' chapter. i guess cause ed is feeling so depressed with his current situation thats why... mmm sad. wonder what will happen tomorrow between ed an russel. I actually thought we were gonna walk in there on some trigham (i cant remember the spelling right now) brother incest lol i reeaaallly swore that was wat was gonna happen LOL

Poor Ed! Hehe, i have nothing more to add, i've told you how i feel about this chapter already. :D

arg. what a way to end a chapter. you give us just enough to keep us reading and loving it and then cut us off at the knees. ah well. i can't wait for the next update.
serpensortia

woooot! cant wait to see what happens if ed finds out its roy!
loved the part where roy whispered in eds ear!!^^

Interesting...Nothing does stay the same which Roy is starting to learn. Secrets usually do come out..no one can keep from leaving some type of clues. Feel sorry for Ed...it is difficult to be at a crossroads in your life. Nothing makes you happy. You know you need to make a change but what change should you make and what will work?? Life can be difficult. And now Russell is thrown into the mix....Well, it will be interesting to see how this story ends.

Okay dear ZaKai, here's one of my most hidden secrets... aside of the RoyEd pairing, RussellEd is my second fave one... you made my day! and this was the first time I've seen them making something.
But of course, the scene I've read was not as good as the previous ones, but that's okay, at least I had my breaf moment... thank you.
Ed fantasizing over his lover, well, that's obvious, and who wouldn't? I mean, you can't see him, you only use all your other senses. You know that sight is one of the most treacherous senses, because you can get the wrong first impression, but the other ones don't do that... you understand my point, don't you? And I kind of envy Ed, because if Ed finally ends knowing his mysterious lover, he could add the sight to his equation, and of course, depending of what you're going to do with the fic, well, Ed would accept or reject... the dream and fantasy would finally end, and the real person would be in front of him.
But between you and me... who would reject such a gorgeous colonel? ah?
Pity this fic is coming to an end, it's very interesting watching Ed using his senses and instincts... as his mind is full of eagerness and memories... and after what they both have done till now, well, Ed's mind will always compare, always... no matter who's the other person.
Well Roy+Ed+Motel=a bed at last, unless you want them to do something more, hehe ... bye.