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a DOG mustang?!!! WTF seriously has problems! seriously kinky problems ha! I was feeling ed's fear when the were in the mud so couldnt really enjoy the smexing this time :( but i loved this chapter for the sole purpose that this experience in particular is going to make it SOOO much worse when ed finds out it's mustang LMAO, whenever that may be. Oh its weird, i know i shd be all about the sexing but i kinda want to see things worked out between ed and al. i get sad when they have problems. Is al really a bastard playing all those girls??? couldn't 'connect' my ass!

You might think you have plenty of time left but it's all going to be gone before you know it.

Ahh, I've been gone working with my own fic problems. I just got caught up!

Let's see first, oh my innocent little Al! He's become a mini-Mustang. Just. Can't. Be. Haha, this is why I love this story eveything so twisted.

As for the latest chapter I can see where this would be difficult, but you did great. I'm not much for dogs, but hey this still worked. As the rough play . . . hmm . . yeah that was my favorite part. Especially with the way you worked in the saftey word.

My goodness I think this story may actually be developing a plot (well beyond Ed finally figuring out its Mustang). Poor little Russell. I have a sneaky suspicion that once again he's interested, but isn't going to get anywhere. Fanfic writers are rather cruel to him.

Looking forward to next update.

I know you said that you had a hard time with this chapter but I really it. Ed realizing that this (from his point of view) has nothing to do with his life with the military and that he should just enjoy it was perfect. I always think that a lot of people look at the things in their lives and try to connect all of it instead of letting certain aspect exist on their own.

I hope the next update comes soon and maybe a little work on Training Edward Elric too. That story is incredible, I dread reading every chapter since things steadily get worse but i keep hoping that things will turn around. Just don't give up on it, I can't stand the thought of such two emotional characters being left in that room; even if it is just fiction.

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Once again, dude you are awesome! I gotta say that I got a little riled up at the thought of end with dog ears, tail and a collar! H-O-T-T!!! Keep it up man!!!

:When he and Al had been trying to find a way to repair what they’d done, he’d felt like a fucking blind dog on a leash that was held by Mustang...: i love the dramatic irony in this line, it really cracks me up >D

My favorite portion of this chapter has to be where Ed uses his safe word and the addmission he makes during that scene and after in the disscussion. Hormonal me actually got a bit teary when he used the safe word... ^^;

Roy is an ass, and it works so well. :D

I don't know if I gave you my email or not but here it is again. Leobdollin75@yahoo.com. Love this story as always, curious as hell to see when the shit hits the fan and Ed finds out or something. lol, looking forward to an update!

The dog scene... Hilarious.

I forgot this...

dark_pyris@yahoo.com

Can't wait for more. *grin*

That was an interesting chapter. I can belive that Ed dressed up and acted like a dog. That was funny though. Mustang is sure one strange character. Poor Ed. I can't wait to see what Mustang has in store for Ed next, it should be interesting for sure. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.