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rawr! omg so awesome! ^^ thank you so much for posting.
Its very addictive! cant wait till you post the next! :3

I don't know why but this chapter isn't my favorite either. Roy was a lot more brutal this time around than he usually is. He was seriously power trippin'. Still, the chapter was good overall tho. I had to do a double take when Ed managed to suck himself! O_O! I didn't know anybody could do that! Roy is a complete fool if he thinks he can do this up to a point then just walk away from it like nothing happened. He can't seriously think he can get away from this unscathed once Ed knows he's the mystery man! Even if he does break things off with Ed, I still believe that Ed is going to figure out who his mystery man is and it will be either really really good or really really bad when he does. I'm afraid of how Ed will react once he knows Roy has used him like he's never done before. Hell, Roy's already starting to slip up! He made sounds twice this time around! He sighed once and he mmm'd once. Sure they're not words and he probably made those sounds softly enough that Ed couldn't really figure him out from them but he still made noise. And whether he likes it or not, Ed is already too addicted to this, dare I say in love with this, to give up his mystery man without a fight, a real one this time! :) Roy's not the master of control he believes himself to be. He let the game get out of hand and he's making noises. He's going to blow his cover long before Ed's assignment is complete and it will be then that either Heaven or Hell will come knocking on Roy's door! :) Beware the wrath of Ed! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

nice very nice. Poor Ed. I can see why he WOULD distrust him. I mean to him he's a complete stranger. I just wonder how he's going to take it when Roy finally tells him its him ya know? Thanks for the update!

I'm sorry it was so hard for you to write, but it certainly was fun to read. I think you did a wonderful job of it! I must admit I'm kind of wondering at what point Ed accidentally learns who it is he's meeting and everything hits the fan. A part of me wants to see that because everyone loves conflict, but their mindless sex sessions are awesome too. I don't care what happens next as long as there is more!

Honestly, I can see why it would be difficult. All of this started for the characters in a lovely sexually intriguing mode, but as they progress through the patterns of lust and eliciteness, one or other would begin to wonder beyond the moment about the other. Edward has started. They had to reach the ultimate in degridation first. Trust had to be found in the moment. It has always been there, but unspoken. Roy is now going to have a little more trepidation and Edward is going to start wondering.

The next bit should be fascinating as they find their way through the sexual morass.

I think you did an excellent job.

EP

omg, omg, omg! i don't know who's the bigger pervert... roy for wanting it, or you for writing it! XD i was almost embarrassed!! HAHAHAHA! though it was funny as hell.

and, omg, when ed took his raincoat off, and you put in that it had been taken from the military storeroom, i was so expecting roy to confuse their coats at the end, and him walk off with ed's and ed walk off with his... dude.

anyway, i really liked this chapter, simply for the humor it provided. i swear i was laughing the entire time! i don't know if that's what you intended, but it was good regardless. and i wonder what's going to happen for ed to find out about mustang, because after roy says he'll break it off before that happens, that's just asking for something to happen. and mustang's so worried about ed developing feelings for him, and i'm so betting he's the one that falls first.

oh, and about al from the last chapter... i agree that he's often portrayed as too nice and innocent, and i think that's why i don't like him much. i even thought about writing a story where he's not a very nice brother, one i may still write. but i thought your portrayal of him in this story was awesome. thanks for that.

anyway, keep up the excellent work, doll!!

This was just wow! very graphic and... animalistic as the title. First time I read and even thought about a fight, or kind of 'dog fight', like the one you see when one wants to pick some of the other one's food, no bites, just... fight...
I was wondering last chapter almost the same questions Roy asked himself here, how long would it take for it to finally end? I mean for Ed to realize who that mysterios man was or just for Roy to handle it without getting suspicious. I liked the 'trust' moment, but... this could be a double-edged sword, you think one thing, but, it can twist to the opposite so easily...
You just take your time... bye

Just found this site and read your story. Wow...I laughed at parts, especially the dog stuff, but it was still hot! I have to admit, I think I learned something ;) Love this pairing, they are the best! Good writing too, very descriptive, allowed me to visualize it all really well O.O

Wow. I don't really know what to say to that. Keep writing, I'm ever waiting for the next chapter.

Awesome story!!!!! It was <3!!!! At first I was all like 'woah' but then I became sucked in!!! and I read every chapter straight with only breaks to use the bathroom.... even then thouigh I was sucked in!!!!! I would TOTALLY love to get alerts my e-mail is Vegimeat at gmail dot com.... THANK YOU FOR CURING MY BOREDOM!!!!!