rate_review Reviews

That was a wonderfull ending to a great story. Yay for Ed getting some of his sight back.

The end was precious. Roy knows he loves Ed. Stop fronting. And I just knew Al would be a serial groom. I'll gladly be his 4th wife ^-^


Great story.

Awww. I LOVE the ending!!!
It's so sweet, and I'm thrilled that everything worked out well for them. T_T

You've got me feeling all sappy now.

Beautiful, ZaKai. I'm both glad and sad you completed the story; glad because of closure, upset because, well, let's face it, Ed and Roy are hot!

On a more serious note, extremely well written, and I enjoyed it thoroughly

Nyan! I love it. Awesome and as always it is written beautifully! Thanks a lot for sharing this story.

ja
LS

wonderful as always I'm glad your last update on this one was before Af took off for what she calls Hueco Mundo or as the mundanes call it her Mum's house she was happy to get to read it (she's stuck with an ancient pentium 2 and dial up for a month) I'm glad to see another of your works done and done very well. keep up the great work my friend

Rysha and Affie

interesting ending, i like how ed got some of his sight back.
but i want to know what roy bought. hmm???

well bother ... i hate it when stories end even tho that was one of the best endings i have ever read...

serpen

keep writing i will keep reading ^_^

Hi, it took me forever to finally sit down and write a review here.
The whole plot was very good, and so were the characters and the super duper hot scenes, but... let me tell you what my head was thinking while reading this last chapter.
My first thought when Roy didn't feel anything when he saw Ed without the glasses was 'What? he's so insensitive! isn't he seeing Ed's blind and he doesn't even feel a little tiny shocked? The super hot scene your dirty mind schemed distracted me a lot, but in the end, I didn't feel okay, something was missing somewhere.
And then I got it. People use to think everything comes from the eyes, I mean, when somebody loses their sight, the first thing you notice is the unfocused eyes and the lost intensity of them. Of course Roy knew how Ed's look was, but during the scene when he proposes Ed to continue doing what they did, I'm sure he wasn't looking at Ed's eyes but his body, because he hadn't paid any attention to the blindfold during their intimate sessions. And for Ed, he didn't have to search for his lover's eyes either because of the same reason: the blindfold. That's the only explanation possible and I think I'll keep it.

Now that there's just the epilogue left to go. I'll dare tell you what I'd like to happen (I don't use to do that, but I can't resist)... I want Ed to recover his sight or even part of it... eventually... I want him to finally look at the other's eyes and viceversa... sight may not be a reliable sense, but they both need it to make the coupling even more perfect. There's nothing better than good sex (or love making depending on the step they were) looking at the other's eyes.
Telling I want them to fall for the other is too cliché, you can keep it implicit but not having them saying or even thinking about it. This fic is too to-the-point to let the fluff fill the room...

Now I'll shut up my own babbling and only wait for the epilogue to appear sooner than later... bye.

bother... only the epiloge left... >.< but i want more... oh well the reader can't have everything...

i hope you start another one soon add me to that list when you have it i love your writing... ^_^

serpen