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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is way too good, I like the element of danger where Ed is leaving himself so wide open. The evil side of me wants to see a mixup where Al ends up hooded and somehow set up waiting instead (would have to be some crazy outfit, like a rubber bondage suit, to hide the lack of automail) as their exploits become more sadistic and dangerously kinky, and there Al would be without knowing the safeword...ouchies. Hee hee!
I'm sure you have something special in store, just don't wait too long to deliver. Hurt him gooooooood for us.........
I'm sure you have something special in store, just don't wait too long to deliver. Hurt him gooooooood for us.........
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I just want to put one thing clare... I LOVE YOUR STORY! Ah, it was god to yell that out! And I would like to me added to your mail list! My adress is lofabe@hotmail.com
Thanks for adding sutch a grate story on AFF so that we all can read a little grate yaoi smut! Keep on posting!
Thanks for adding sutch a grate story on AFF so that we all can read a little grate yaoi smut! Keep on posting!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter. Poor Al, for not being able to talk to Ed as easy as they once could. Who knew that Al would be such a ladies man. Also poor Ed with all those hickies. Can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter.
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good; gotta love RoyEd! ~.^
I loved the plot advancement in the lastest chapter.
Can't wait for the next part! XD
I loved the plot advancement in the lastest chapter.
Can't wait for the next part! XD
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o Al's a player?! XD omg... i did NOT see that coming! good Twist~!!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa al... was NOT expecting that! oh and 'het sex alert'! aaaahhhh! LOL
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well my email is already in this comment, but here you go anyway: fuzzyeared@yahoo.com
Please email me with updates ^^ Thank you
And now for the comment:
I'll keep it simple, this is fucking hot.
Please email me with updates ^^ Thank you
And now for the comment:
I'll keep it simple, this is fucking hot.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Ed's not going to hook up with Russel is he? PLEASE SAY NO!!! *covers eyes* I coudldn't take that!!!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A different chapter. Yes, Al's different to what Ed thought he was. But, isn't it that when you cross the line from virgin to experienced you tell somebody? anybody!, and I wonder to whom Al told about his first time, who the chosen one was.
Fun to think of Ed saying 'brother!' instead of Al. Bye.
Fun to think of Ed saying 'brother!' instead of Al. Bye.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles madly* Well, that's one way to ruin your brother's image of you.
Well, Ed's new job sounds.... interesting. And it's....nice to know Roy's still being a jerk. XD
Well, Ed's new job sounds.... interesting. And it's....nice to know Roy's still being a jerk. XD