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^^ Al the player, nice touch. I read this on MediaMiner, then found it here after you posted that last chapter. ;D Send me an e-mail next update, please! ShamanKing986@yahoo.com

"He was never going to fuck in a car again... Not only had it been cramped, but it had been uncomfortable, and he’d never been in so many strange ass positions in his life." LMAO Strange ass positions! XD Roy did have his ass in some strange positions! :D I don't know if that was an intended double entendre or not but that was funny! :)

I went back and reread the conversation Ed and Al had at the breakfast table after Ed checked himself in the mirror and saw the hickeys. Al's behavior made more sense once you knew what he knew (i.e. what he saw on Ed). What Al must think of his brother now! ;) Ed claims to be not dating anyone yet here he is sporting some very obvious evidence of having been with someone! :D mm-hmm! You know Al can't help but wonder if Ed is out being some sort of man-whore! *giggles* If Al knew that Ed had in fact been just that, a whore for his mystery man, he would pass out!! XD But, it's not like HE has any room to talk! OH.MY.GOD!! AL IS A PLAYER!! *dies laughing* woo! Roy would be so proud to know that Al is following in his "love 'em and leave 'em" footsteps!! :D It is nice, in a weird sorta way, to see Al being something other than the little goody-two-shoes he's always portrayed to be. I couldn't believe Al just did the girl on Ed's bed and then Ed just crawls into said bed like there was nothing to it! eww! I couldn't sleep in a bed my brother and some ho had been in without changing the sheets first! :) It was kinda funny that Ed could hide in the closet and have room enough to take care of business! I guess his diminuative stature came in rather handy after all! XD

*bangs head on desk* Russell?!?! Aw man! I hate that conceited ass! ugh. *grouses* sorry, no-good, arrogant, self-important, pompous sonofabitch. :( I feel so sorry for Ed right now. Those hickeys are getting him so much attention he so doesn't want. Roy just HAD to go and mark his territory right before Ed had to go work with Russell. *sighs* This job of making explosives makes me nervous. What kind of explosives are we talking about here? Nothing on the level of a fission bomb I hope! *has nightmare flashback to Conqueror of Shamballa* :[ Ack! Look out! Runaway imagination! @_@ LOL
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. gonna vs ganna. *sigh* I guess it's a matter of personal choice. Gonna at least is in the dictionary so that's what I use. :)

So Al is a bit of a player huh...I loved that plot twist and it was way WAY unexpected! *KUDOS*

I love non-cannon Al...and in some way I can actually see Al being a closet freak. ^_^

haha poor Ed with hicky's. this is a gud story an i like wher u'r goin wi it. an who wud of suspected Al? kudos 2 u my friend

sorry 4got email addy. santiago4001@hotmail.com

ooohhh. two updates. i feel spoiled. grin. likd the car scene although wished it could have beenthe school uniform instead. but that's just me. i like pretty boys dressed as pretty boys anyway.

later
saint

ooooohhhh al's a player. bad al no biscuit!

and i agree with ed. russell's an annoying shit.

later

Kinky... dark... hot... slightly messed up. Yep, I love it alright. my email is brownie9545@msn.com, let me know when you have more chapters up. It's awesome

I can't believe how...sex straved Ed is O_O...and he watched his brother O_O!! wow, I'm sure he's glad they didn't see his coat or nothing...or...what if Al knew Ed was home O_O!?! haha

Love your story ^_^! It's sometimes hard to find a good yaoi story, but when I find one, I'll read it and love it.
I would really want to know when you update the story. Address: kuraiyukita@yahoo.com