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*giggling* oh goddess we take a bit off and get to see two updates at once *grin* it was great thanks for keeping on with the writing we're looking foreward to more... to bad Edo would look cute in the schoolgirl outfit rysh said....

Affie and Rysh
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I am with Ed. It is hard to think of Al having sex or being a player. Al and sex...hard to believe and then he is after Ed to tell him about his life when he has not mentioned this part of his to Ed. Then the other part where he uses Ed to make a move on the girl. Al Al Al. On another note I wondered if Russel would have been the person Ed did not want to work with. Mustang is bad...he knows of the bad blood between the two young men. I wonder if Russel will decide to hit on Ed too. Wonder what will happen when Ed figures out his mystery man is Roy and why he enjoyed having Ed come to his office on a daily basis: to needle him especially after marking him. Do not want to be in Roy's shoes at that moment.

That was just brilliant, seriously the parts in the lab were priceless. Al and the girl how unexpected but so good.

oooh, smex on Edward's bed. *grins* Hot as usual! *jealous of your talents as always*

Ed's a dirty boy! Watching his brother screw that chick! And Al! Who knew he was so....slick! Can't wait for the next chapter! I have missed this fic!

grumble grumble grumble, i love the plot, and I WANT MORE OF IT!!!
i love where your taking this, can't wait for the next chapter!!
~_^

XD. FullMetal is a closet freeeak!
I've only finished the first chapter, but I can't wait to read the rest of this.
I love that he gave in without a fight. Even if he's normally feisty, I've found that most people will give in easily in this sort of situation, so this sort of response is very realistic [which I LOVE]. <333

if Ed still wants to move out he can use what he just saw as another excuse (besides the hickeys that is :-P): so that they both have privacy to invite people... and so their beds are safe :-P because I feel sorry for Ed that he has to sneak around and hide in closets both literally and figuratively! :-P that pun was just asking for it! but how can Al say Ed is hiding things from him if he's doing the same? hypocrite!
hope for more soon!

HA! Al is a slut! That is so awsome, no one ever does Slut!Al. OMG! I had no idea Russel was going to be in this fic! I love Russel! I would totaly worship you as a god if you gave us some Russel/Ed action!

I wish I could have seen the look on your husbands face! I'm sure that must have been priceless! I swear, I came on to my husband one time and he actually asked me "have you been reading your stories again?" hahahaha!

Mmmm.... Things to not read at work.... ^.^"
But, yes, please add me to your list? batsutousai @ livejournal.com