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Hello! Ok first thing I have to say is leather miniskirt! Naturally Roy would pick out a miniskirt. That and aren't you miss clever. The whole periodic table thing. As usual excellent chapter. Can't wait to see how Ed explains his new little "love mark".

ultimate hotness!! ^^ thank you so much for updating!!
oh god I loved the naughty spanking and ed playing as a hooker. X3 brilliant!
Im also too curious what will happen when ed finds out who has been fuckin him.
you're doing a great job! got me and my friends addicted! ^^ cant wait till the next chapter!!!

*grins* Nobelium. *chuckles fondly and shakes head* Only you, Ed. Only you. :D This was the hottest chapter ever! WOOHOO!! Is it possible to die of a nosebleed? LOL! Ed acting like a cheap slutty whore is the best! You are the best author ever!! *worships at your feet* You may have had some difficulty getting this chapter to come together *grins at the double entendre* but it worked out perfectly in the end! (Ooh! Look who checks the LJ story update page! Gotta keep tabs on my favorite author! :D)

I'm getting really anxious about when Ed finally figures out that his mystery man is Roy. (Sorry, Roy. Ed will eventually know who you are.) I mean, I want him to know because he deserves to know who it is who's been pleasuring him so much but, at the same time, it will lessen the titillating eroticism of it all when all is revealed. *sigh* Damned if you do, damned if you don't! XD I know Ed will figure it out. He's slowly gathering clues and they will soon add up for him. I still can't believe Ed hasn't taken notice of Roy's cologne or soap or natural scent! (I wonder if the ignition cloth gloves would add a scent to his hands...) Being blindfolded should have sharpened his other senses and one would think that he'd be more aware of these things. *shrugs* Guess he's been too focused on the sense of touch to give the sense of smell much notice! ;) Roy won't be able to control himself indefinitely either. Sooner of later he will slip up and do or say something and then all hell's gonna loose! I'm just so nervous about how Ed will react when he finally does know! :[ I don't want Ed to become so horrified and disgusted with himself for letting Roy do these things to him that he shuts down and denies himself! ;_; (Extreme much? Yeah, that's me. Always gotta find the worse case scenario. *sigh*) I just hope Ed doesn't freak out too badly when he does figure it out! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. "I’m ganna cum..." "You ganna get your money’s worth or what?" It's gonna not ganna. Ganna's not a word.
P.P.S. You nose it. *groans and rolls eyes* That's the worst pun ever! XD

OMG...that was really really HOTT!!!*drools*

Oh you never cease to amaze me with each installment of this fic. I am so enjoying this,
and as per usual I am eagerly awaiting the next one. ^_^

And KUDOS for squeezing in the periodic table!! SQUEE!! (that had to be hard to work in and how you did it was pure genius!)

Yay! you finally updated! Im gald...real good chap by the way! Loved it! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!

mhahaha ed's prostitute talk' was hysterical!! i loved it. and i was not expecting the package to be 2 kinky little outfits lol and of course ed would try them on and decide he looked hot LOL he so kills me in this fic hahahahaha good job as usual :)

Oooh! That was totally hott!!! I can't wait until Ed finds out who's fucking him! I bet that he will be torn between being pissed as all hell or wondering if he should just keep going!!! LOL!!! Loved the sex toy addition btw! Keep up the great work!!!

ALL HAIL THE GREAT & POWERFUL YOU!!! omg that was so sexy!!! i can hardly wait for the 6th chapter!!
plz update soon, and god Edward is sexy when he's being a dirty little slut, *huggles* have some pokie you totaly powen ed's ass!!

Great chapter. Who knew Ed had it in him! I can't wait to see what happens if Al finds out about Ed's night time activity. That should as good as when Ed finds out that it is Roy. Teehee Looking forward to the next chapter.