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for Blind Obsession

by ZaKai

person lingling
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NYAAA~! I had thought that this story had died since it's been so long! But you did a great job with this chapter and it was indeed worth the wait. I love how whorish Ed acts during sex. Go you, w00t.
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very yummy once again XD


kiki
person serpensortia06
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARG!!! your killing me slowly and i love it! keep up the great writing!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Fucking Hell in a Handbasket! That was incredible! My husband dosen't know it but he loves you because he get's laid more often becuase of your fantastic smut!

I just love kinky Edward! I also though it was really in character for him not to pick the school girl outfit and the reason that he didn't want to look younger or be innocent.

Roy is such a bastard! (and you do such a good Bastard!Roy) for marking up poor old Ed, cause it gets him off.

SQUEE! I just love your fics so much I don't even know what to say! They make my brain melt and slide out of my ear!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i don't know why, but i foresee disaster with mustang's last thought there. and i had this insane moment where i thought ed's safe word would be mustang, you know, he doesn't like mustang so whatever he doesn't like sexually he'd call out mustang's name and that would ruin something or other, and since the man is mustang, that would just open a whole can of worms and stuff. so, yeah, insane.

but i do hope that this trist mysterioso does evolve into love, because i'm a sap like that. anyway, keep up the awesome work! until next time!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol nobelium
person Al
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! another update! *sooo forgot to review the last chapter* sorry! -_-; busybusybusy..and stuffs. xDDDD anyways, loved this chapter and I know it's a little late but I gotta say that the last chapter was my absolute favorite! Specially with the dream. xDD hilarious and smexy! Oh well, on with this chapter!

Ed in a hooker outfit with anal beads out of his ass...... Mmm, if I could draw, I'd sooo draw that for you, cuz I'm crazy like a stalker like that ;) One question for you, does Ed have the blind fold on? *curious*
person Kaz
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very gud...i like ur ideas and the fic is hot! be sure2 give me a shout wen u next update plz. very very good. Rock On! Kaz xxx
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You, know, i've loved the "nobelium" idea, very clever. These particular, these little attentions that you put even in the smut fic (usually "lighter", "funnier"), that's why I love so much all your stories, I think. For this, and because you write things for what I blush only in think them! XDDD My god, what a shy school girl I am, that dress that Ed hasn't worn would be good for me! I was wondering a thing: but Edward is always near the Colonel. He doesn't smell him? I mean: everyone has a particular, peculiar scent (or it is so, or I'm some sort of dog because the first thing that I use into distinguish people is their odor!!!! XD). Even over fragrances or aftershaves... It's a strange question? Sorry!!!! XDDD This review is for you to remenber that i'm a constant presence in your fics! XDD Compliments!!!!
person Kaz
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i deffo like this story, sorry its taken so long 2 comment my pc fuked up. email me plz santiago4001@hotmail.com. is Ed gunna find out... i fink he shud :D

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