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I really love this story. It's so naughty and it has a whole lot of spice and suspense. Keep up the good work ;)

Way WAY hot. I love it, and I can't wait to see what Mustang has up his sleeve now. I'm also glad to see that Ed is still himself when he's at work etc, it would be boring if he turned out to be slutty and submissive all the time after his encounters. It just wouldn't be Ed. Wonderful job!

Really great story; a little more smutty than I usually read but I like it nonetheless! I have only ever watched one episode of FMA so I don't really know who Roy is, or what his character is like; but from what I've seen, I think you're doing Ed really well. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

dear lord, het sex.. warn a girl about that before hand ey? LOL The break room sequence, LMAO tooo funny!! poor havoc, even little eddy's getting laid and not him. my only prob isssss after the next encounter ed's going away for months??! but how will roy sex him up then?! i must know, ergo you must continue soooooonnnn!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! I need more! *twitches and foams at the mouth* I need more, dammit! My e-mail is misha1137@hotmail.com and please do try to update soon! This is perhaps THE hottest fic I've ever read. I nearly drooled, for serious! nEeD mOrE . . . mOrE sEx aNd kInKy-nEsS. *has officially gone rabid*

Nice Chaper, but I'm kinda confused @_@. First, um how did Ed end up picking up the package? didn't the colonel say that it would be too dangrous?_? I love the sex scene at the beginning, it was a little creepy though(since you wouldn't see Hawkeye in that position...)anyway...I can't wait to find out who he has to work with! Hopefully, it's someone HOT! Hopefully with a side of sex...make me proud with the next chapter;)
[anessavanella@aim.com] Please don't forget to e-mail me when the next update is here...:)

Well well!! :D Roy has quite the imagination doesn't he! That was one seriously kinky dream! It threw me for a second that Riza was involved (Riza? in a yaoi fanfic? WTH?) but it's all good 'cause ya gotta love a threesome no matter what - the more the merrier! :D (RoyEdAl threesomes are a personal favorite!!) I never would have thought that Roy would let Ed take him, even if it was in a dream. HOT! :) Shame on you for teasing me with all these delicious clues! :D Kitties (like me!) are hopelessly drawn to curious things dangled in front of us! :D What's in the box Roy ordered from Dickie? I have a rough idea of what's in the box (that Ed will pickup from the post office for some mysterious reason! Why is Roy making him do this?) since he needs to have a safe word. I bet I know what's in Ed's immediate future! :) I'm dying to know what Ed will be doing in Lab 2 and with whom!! I can't remember if it was ever mentioned who worked in what lab in the anime. GAH!! Who is this 'him' in Lab 2?? I wanna know!! Oh, shame on Roy for making Ed wait a whole week. Doesn't he know how much this is killing Ed and me?! LOL!!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

lol, yeah, Roy LOVES being a pain in Ed's ass. ;) lol, love the chapter... curious as to who Ed has to work with... and what Roy's planning... oh and this is kuragari75 I just got an account so I dropped the 75. Anyway, love it!!! Waiting for update!!!

Yay! I love this story! It gives all my needs. Thanks for adding me to your mailing list. I'm so glad you updated. Who is it that Ed has to work with? I can't wait to read. And I can't wait for Roy and Ed's next scene! I'm so excited! Keep me posted! Great job!

you need to write more soon, i love ed all slutty, sexyness add me to your mailin g list puh-lez VassagoGirl@aol.com danke danke