rate_review Reviews

I'm so glad that they worked something out. I love how you ended this and I look forward to the epilogue.

I really love your writing style, you have a real talent.

wonderful chapter. wonderful story. i'm very pleased with the outcome :D i'm also very pleased that he didn't miraculously get his eyesight back and all. it may have been nice for him to see again, but a very long recovery would be better than he suddenly having sight. anyway, i'm rambling, but it was very, very good. i love this story so much. and i look forward to the epilogue.

great job, deary, and i look forward to your other works as well!

God I love this story! And I love how you ended it! Not with mush or them faling in love, but with them still barley being friends and just wanting to keep fucking eachothers brains out! The whole story is just so DIRTY and I LOVE IT!

Coolies you updated *grin* Af was squeeling the house down when she saw *laugh*. oh and Yamma-Jii sends gretings. I can't wait to see what you've done. it's great to see a roy ed where they don't end up sappy lovesick fools or are really over the top in the angst factor ya know. there are few out there that have the right ballance i've only seen about three or four authors that have the ballance right. (Af just yelled that she's not one of those she's either sickly sweet or angst up the wazoo and is sticking her tongue out at me). Keep up the great work looking foreward to the epilogue

Awesome! ^_^ I'm so glad it ended the way it did. It was realistic and nice. I would have hated an 'i love you' 'i love you too' ending. Awesome really. Thanks for sharing!

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Very nicely done. Not sure how I missed this one for as long as you've had it up. You've done a very good job here, and I wouldn't be opposed to reading the epilogue, necessary or not. Thanks for the nice read,
--A

That was a great chapter. I can't believe that Mustang let Ed do that to him. But go Ed, finally getting to top Roy. Looking forward to reading the last chapter.

delightful, honey. you could leave off the epilogue and everything would be just fine.

Aww, they're so cute together...

Awesome story, looking forward to the epilogue, except that it means it's over, lol...

I'm excited to see the epilogue! As well as bummed this story has come to a close. It's been awsome... and I may end up reading it a few times over. lol.