rate_review Reviews

Wow! This was a really great story! I love it so far! Nice pairing and excellent writing style. Nice job!

I would like to be notified when updated please ^__^

My email is: shagojyoxchohakkai@yahoo.com :D

Another wonderful chapter my dear. I enjoyed almost as much as they did!

OMG!!! This is pretty much THE hottest thing I've ever read!! Thank you so much for sharing!! And I'd love it if you could email me when you update, that'd be great. ^_^ My email is silver_wolf361@yahoo.com. WAH! But does Ed get to know that it's Roy? Please?

OMFG that was so damn hot please keep up the great work we're both impressed by the sleeze factor that edward is showing

Affie and Rysha

Nuuuuuuu did I really type that?! =P You can post whatever you like, I'll just take to re-reading the chapter before each new one you post, so I can remember what's happening from now on =D

I've actually done that, been partway through a chapter of a story and wonder where a certain character is and realize a) that character is dead in that story, b) that character isn't even in that story, or worse c) that character is an OC that doesn't even belong to the author of the story I'm reading, and thus will NEVER show up in that story.

Keep up the good work, ZaKai-sama =D

That was a great chapter. Just like Roy said, who thought that Ed could be such a little slut? How many more chapters do you think before Ed finds out that it is Roy? Cause I can't wait to read what his reaction will be. Looking forward to the next chapter.

nice and sluttly XD

Yuuum. Of course, you already knew that! *L* I love this story.

Damn, just damn. That was so hot! You are the master of hot slutty sex!

Ed would die if he knew it was Roy, seriously. He'd probably take Mustang out with him too.. ^^;

So hot... so very hot...