rate_review Reviews

I loved it!!! Soo HOTT!!!

okay, i love this story. i reviewed chapter 3 once, but i found it just repeated what i'd said last time, so i thought i should give you a better review. i'm so surprised with the language coming out of ed's mouth, though i know i probably shouldn't be, lol. but, he's just so vocal and demanding for a newbie. i think it's great ^_______^ can't wait for the next chapter!

I love it!!! Soo HOTT!!! I wonder what Roy bought at the store? A dildo, perhaps? Please keep writing and e-mail me when the next chapter is out!!!

Here's my e-mail just in case the site won't show it! goth_cool@hotmail.com

Eheheh......hi! I'm an unknown stalker. I've read your fanfics and I fell in love with them. Especially this one! And I was hoping that you would update soon!

TTFN-
Al

I love it so far... Very well written! I cannot wait for more. Please email me when you update!

Oops! I forgot to leave my email... mrsroymustang11@aim.com

Kya! I love this story so much!! Chapter one was so awesome! And Chapter two so tantalizingly delicous! Poor Ed, so frustrated; and now they have to wait till MONDAY?!! It's too cruel! Make Monday come soon oh benevolent and god-like author! Please! I must have more of this wonderful story! It's so incredibly exciting it makes me want to cry when I reach the end-TBC.
Please write more soon! And send me the update as soon as you've finished typing! Or as each paragraph is written - that works too. Please! You cannot end it here! You promised there'd be more! I want more! I need more!

haha! i love this story! is great! poor ed! the person he hates the most happens to be the person he wants to be with....haha! i can imagine his face when he finally discovers who is his secret lover!

God I love this fic! The blind fold idea was so good. Who knew that this kink could be so good? Let's see the first chapter was incredibly hot. Ed's dirty language made it even better - after all he is known for his use of bad language. As for the second chapter, I like how you described Ed and Al's relationship - especially the part about having homes next door to each other. Roy is so cruel to Ed and I can't help but wonder how you are going to reconcil the relationship later. It is rather difficult to do - I know!

As a side note, there are a few typos, but nothing serious. I understand that it is hard to edit your own work.

Well all and all I can't wait for the next chapter. Is it set for Monday night? I sure hope so.